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Lovely Tanka, Wilma! Mooi geskryf! Al die beste ... Gert:)

Very good attitude in this one, Wilma. Not giving into despair!

Out of thefire rises the phoenix, from old ways come new beginnings and this write is most encouraging and full of hope and promise of better things to come.... Once folk have a roof they have somewhere to start rebuilding their lives back together... Well done to capture this in so few words is a gift in itself! Kindest thoguhts, Anna-Marie.

Thats a strong person, an inspiration to all... Lovely write my poet partner...luv Michael

You seem like a strong woman, Wilma, and you have inspired me with hope today. Thank you! Diane

Lovely Tanka offering hope to those who look >> James

Hang on to that hope, Wilma. There have to be some good men out there. Your poem started out sad, but ended on a high note. A round of applause for you in providing us with hope! Love, Carolyn

It was pleasure to read your poetry today Wilma. Love, Carol

Enjoyed reading today, keep sharing and thanks for your support.

Oh my Wilma this reminds me of the song I co*wrote on called Looking for a place to call home if you like stop by myspace.com/kathystellamusic and check that song out this was a great tanka and had great imagery but I do hope it's fictional also thanks for all your kind comments on my works I will be back soon to give ya more keep up great work