The Seagulls Commute

I commute down the highway quite early each morn:
South toward the seashore, days work to be done.
Half way to the ocean, traveling north through the sky;
A large flock of sea gulls, passes me by.

They too have their work load cut out for the day:
At the nearest large land-fill, on their ravenous way.
Traveling ever far inland away from the sea:
They will spend the day scouring town dumps for debris.

The hours pass slowly: comes the end of my day,
I drive the same highway to a home far away.
I see in the distance flying back to the shore;
The same flock of seagulls, but hungry no more.

I can never help smile when I meet them again,
These feathered shoplifters, heading where I have been.
Life's very well ordered for these ‘foul’ of the sea,
Who each day earn a living, stealing smelly debris.

Dusk finds them at shore line with short, squawk filled flights,
They will then disappear to where gulls go at night.
And with a new morning; I will greet them once more:
On their way to those landfills, from their home at the shore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/10/2015 5:31:00 AM
Very beautiful and harmonic Rhyme with images so vivid but sad for me, observing the sea gulls becoming "land gulls"! Of course this is not your mistake, mon amie, Diane, but that of Man's disturbance of the environment! I would like to welcome you, my dear, to our poetic family!
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Diane Lefebvre
Date: 3/10/2015 3:27:00 PM
Thank you so kindly for your lovely comments and warm welcome to Poetry Soup, Demetrios. I wrote 'The Seagulls Commute' as a light-hearted piece . . as it appears that gulls made their peace with mankind many long years ago, for they were happily picking town dumps for all the years I can remember, which is a lot of years!
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