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The Sea Shore


sparkling  dancing sea waves touch the shore with flowing magic
of cobalt blue filaments that reflect the sky   above
oh  endless the huge expanses of pristine shoreline
and the jagged seaward cliffs where cormants and auks nest
wild   deep   and cold    oh restless the rising tide . . . 

a cool wind whips off the sea and gulls call
the fishing pier lonely of fishermen this morn'
boardwalks   a vast emptiness
foraging albotrosses glide then plunge into the sea

sea waves crashing on weathered rocks in an endless rolling
gentle foaming changes to wild thunder
and yet   serene the sea shore view to me
I stayed with the crashing till the last rays of sunset
that fringed the horizon then dipped and fell . . .

and in the moonlight the shore is darkly elusive
with hidden life and I drink the tranquility
this mysterious vastness of endless sand and views
and always in the background   those unending waves
  caressing
       the sea shore . . .

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February 1, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/The Sea Shore
Copyright Protected, ID 16-750-997-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, The Sea Shore
Sponsor, Craig Cornish

Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Hi Broken, how i do find peace within your words, sublime joy in the visions they do paint on the canvas of my mind. How gentle your words flow like the waters themselves. This is the serene dream my friend. One can step within your words and be at the heart of the vision seeing all happening before them. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, belated, i am sorry for that. A seven and a fave for this dream of a write my friend....Vlad.
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Vlad, thank you for that beautiful comment, and congratulations, the 7, and fave ! I was disappointed at the time that this poem only got an HM in the contest, I guess beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I personally think it is tranquil and lovely ~
A   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 1:23 AM
Again thank you
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Broken, Congrats on your "Sea Shore win." LINDA
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats, appreciate !
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Broken!!
La France Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Upma, thanks for the awesome and the congrats !
Wigley Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 11:11 PM
A lovely piece, BW, very calming. let's go sit on a rock with a cone. Congrats, Viv x
La France Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Viv, thanks for the lovely and the congrats, and I would love to sit on that rock with you watching the sea flow and talk poetry !
Gentry Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations, so grateful !
Scars Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest!!! *smiles* -luloo
La France Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:21 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting my poem and for the congrats and smiles ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Exquisite imagery and such a lovely sense of serenity in this peaceful poem Constance. Best of luck in the contest.#7
La France Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Connie, oh I love that word exquisite, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the peaceful and the 7 ~
Inman Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Lovely poem, BW
La France Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:56 AM
James, thanks for the lovely ~
Sage Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 4:33 PM
you've done this theme so well, expressed excellently, best of luck in the contest
La France Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Sage, thanks for visiting my sea shore, and for the encouragement, appreciate ~
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