The Sea Shore

The sea shore, where thoughts become untied,
and the spirit yearns with its ebb and flow,
watching the sun cut across the horizon like a dull knife,
as the day moves through time to the color red.
There between amber light and rendered dark,
waves allow silence to dwell.
Asking the mind to describe the indescribable,
where senses are lost,
and welcomed scenes of birds silhouette across,
a rainbow sky bending to the horizon.
The coolness of wet sand wraps around the skin
as you glide through soft foam.
and the undulating of each wave wells up,
to end at the feet before pulling back,
leaving a sense of eternity.
To stay, to cross into twilight where stars beckon,
leaving trails upon the sky, as though a match was struck,
bring secrets woven by the moon's light,
dripping on the black water surface,
like a crown of crusted jewels to welcome a lonely traveler.
As the imprints left by the day wash out to sea.

Contest The Sea Shore
1/30/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Jerden Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:05 PM
You catch that timeless, elemental nirvana that I always find on a quiet beach in the evening. Excellent job! I would have placed it higher due to the elegant, but simple, and effortless vocabulary.
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Frederic, Congrats on your "Sea Shore win." LINDA
Leiser Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Beautiful! Congrats on your awesome win, Frederic :)
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:19 AM
Outstanding work Frederic.. Congrats on awesome win!
Wigley Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Terrific, Frederic, a wonderful sense of place and mood. Your years afloat have given you much to draw upon, and it shows. Well done. regards, Viv
Gentry Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Excellent imagery and description. Congratulations on your win!
Scars Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Frederic, "To stay, to cross into twilight where stars beckon, leaving trails upon the sky, as though a match was struck, bring secrets woven by the moon's light," Such lovely imagery Frederic..Congrats on your placement -luloo *smiles*
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:07 PM
oh my gosh, this is absolutely GORGEOUS. Wow, Frederic, a FAVE upon this one.
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 6:55 AM
- A winning poems Frederic, superbly written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gorelick Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Enjoyed this serene read. BG
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 2:06 PM
rich in language, gentle the flow, frederick.. you speak of languid moments wit poetic mastery.. huggs!
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