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The Sea in my room

As a child, with my Nanna, making the bed - waves of sheet crash, underneath is cool - dark, need to breathe, roll on the carpet-beach, watch the white-surge flapping, snapping, falling up and down up and down calming, resting smelling sunshine.

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Date: 5/9/2024 2:46:00 PM
what a delightful read--reminded me of my own imaginative childhood. You've beautifully captured the childlike magic of a child's imagination. have a great evening, Sara
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 5/9/2024 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Sara, That's why we like writing poetry now. J :)

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