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a warm breath in the night caresses the nape of my neck my eyes still closed sense its sweetness and in the backdrop the pitter-pattter of raindrops gently falling serene i savour the moment stretching it into the depths of a moonless darkness AP: 2nd place 2025

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Date: 9/9/2024 7:01:00 PM
A very beautiful and intimate poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Karen ~
Date: 9/9/2024 11:35:00 AM
A very calming poem that gives me the sensory and the visual of one beautiful night, you encompass it all here dear Line,
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mystic Rose ~
Date: 9/7/2024 11:21:00 AM
Love this , Line. You are a master of the form you always ask for in your contests , the short succinct poetry that I adore.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 8:24:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea for your lovely comment. Most appreciated ~

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