The Sapphire Beauty

The sapphire eyed beauty like
 a wonder of the world                                                                                                          

She has my heart in the
 palm of her hand                                                                              

I get lost staring in to
 another world in  her eyes                                                                  

she lights up the empty
 room in my chest                                                                           

shes one of a kind
 and always on my mind                                                                           

her beauty is so strong 
she could tame a lion                                                                       

my heart is like a drum solo
 when shes next to me                                                              

she is grater then any gem for a gem doesn't have the power of love  
 The blue eyed Angel is 
worth more then a sapphire is 
worth more then the world she
 worth more than everything as
 her 
beauty is priceless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/30/2010 9:30:00 AM
Hi. Another great piece. Sorry about Nevada. Bloody Internet can be a pain sometimes. Waterford here. Go on the Lilywhites. Cheers , Eamon
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:41:00 AM
Sounds like a great person, blessings in your endeavors. Welcome to the soup. Drop by me anytime, you are welcome as my friend.
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Elton. Wishing you the best in your writing Mikeendeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2010 1:50:00 AM
your expressive use of phrasing is lovely..got a little lost in the end but strong images come from this
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:53:00 PM
I like those sapphire eyes... sounds gorgeous!
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:51:00 PM
Great romantic and expressive write...Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Welcome to soup...Sara
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:28:00 PM
Hi Elton. I can see your new to soup or else have'nt submitted for a while as I see you're a member and fav poet.Well I like this especially some of your imagery and I would like to read more poems. Thanks for your comments.I believe I have Celtish blood in me according to my maiden name(McC...) And somehow feel an infinity with anything Irish more so than Scottish but I don't know my roots. Till next time Luv June(to my soup friends)
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:02:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed this creative write of yours tonight Elton.. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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