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The Sapphire

The Sapphire Could I but turn a sapphire inside out, And walk beneath its night blue skies, Lighted only by diamonds set therein. I would find it dull as the gray of twilight, Compared to my fall into your phalo eyes.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/6/2017 9:13:00 PM

Delightfully charming.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/26/2017 6:25:00 PM

When the night is come wait for early dawn... morning light is warm fears will be all gone..

Chris Green

Date: 3/20/2017 11:16:00 AM

I have now read this at least 5 times and find myself more amazed at this gorgeous poem each time. Wow my friend, this is so beautiful and just the thought of turning a sapphire inside out and it still doesn't compare to the beauty you see. Wow again. Loved this.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2017 6:38:00 PM

You are so kind, Chris!!!! I appreciate your reading my poems, and for such a wonderful comment.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/20/2017 10:22:00 AM

Hello Sunlite. Such beautiful poetic expression and wonderful imagery. You have captured a marvelous essence. Well done

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2017 6:36:00 PM

Thank you, Lisa!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/19/2017 12:21:00 PM

I really love this...beauty personified

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2017 10:25:00 AM

I'm sorry, I don't know how my answer to Lynn went to you. But be assured that I really appreciate your comment.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2017 10:22:00 AM

Thank you, Lynn, and thank you for the fave and 7. I'm flattered.

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/19/2017 3:18:00 AM

Wow Sunlite! This is gorgeous :-) Creatively penned and a joy to read.:-) a fave, 7+ lynn

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2017 10:24:00 AM

I don't know how it happened, but I accidentally put my answer to you under Tim Smith's post. I said "thank you, Lynn, and thank you for the fave and 7. I am flattered."

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/18/2017 9:27:00 PM

Hi Sunlite, a beautifully written piece. An excellent write from a golden pen. Your heart does sing. This has to be a seven Sunlite. It slips so easily into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2017 10:22:00 AM

Thank you! And Thank you for the fave.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/18/2017 7:24:00 PM

the imagery is stunning Sunlite I especially love the first three lines:-) hugs jan xx

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2017 10:21:00 AM

Thank you. I love it when lines are singled out.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/18/2017 6:35:00 PM

Wow, so romantic! :) Beautiful poem!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2017 10:20:00 AM

Your comment is very appreciated!