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The Sandy Storm

I Even in this crypt, me soul wait no longer! Its crest burnt- The Eagle velt; born of virtue, Less corruptible, grieve in its lounge thirst! The Sandy Storm. A day without rain calls the storm Within the crypt, the souless wails! Whose charming flutes shall calm these? Shall David's songs enrich souls or mar? The sandy storm. Crypts; a taboo for soul- full, Lest, I began wailing - for, Its greatness, lies thereof Shadows crested our flags, whirling winds; A shiver to our darling hearts. Minted coins; blood of aztec! Crypts' song; livens the sandy storm From the soulless; born of the velt. Wielded by the sonorous Adored by the mightiest, On whose fax, shall its shadow run? The sandy storm. Raging as its neon star; shining in its darkening path! Our lonely night, a walk for the craving crow. Shall friends be foe! Shall mothers be lovers! Never! II The sandy storm; the spirits journey, The sandy storn; an over- comed threshold! Obeisance; a joy which gladdens my hold. I'll hold the fort, high steamed, with bellows of men. Let no velt be built - for the velt; a shadow of history! Shadow of history, in hearts, it lives. On the path to Nile, The journey of breath, Shall I rest my bossom The velt once born, the velt once taken, the velt once - The Sandy Storm

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Date: 6/9/2014 7:46:00 AM
Babayinka, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/9/2014 6:22:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured,
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Date: 5/29/2014 12:36:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Babayinka :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2014 6:48:00 PM
Babayinka, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:59:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Babatinka. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:44:00 PM
Babatinka, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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