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The Sands of Love

Two statues of stone
On pedestals in the park
One male
One female
White objects of a perfections beauty
Yet they stood erect and alone
When the rain fell
This was their tears
The stared at each other with longing
The trees grew tall
Season by season the flowers bloomed
Two statues standing erect in the prison of life's hold

A poet walked in the park
Glancing at lovers, kisses at dusk
He stared at the statues above his head
He knew, with dread, the loneliness of stone maidens
He waited for the park to become enclosed in the twilight
With toil and sweat he did succeed on his lark
Pushing the statues close rather than apart
As one statue danced and the other one sang
They kissed the sweetness of night and felt the tears of joy
All because a poet
Wished them a lovers embrace
He knew them like they were his children
For here he was as well
A statue
In love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Das Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 10:16 PM
What an absolute gem. Adding this to my favorites.
Vaso Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Thank you so much Nandita!!!!
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Ahh, the romantic heart of a poet can move the universe!... Beautiful piece, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Vaso Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Thank you so much Arlene!
Nance Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Its Saturday so be sure to romance now... hope you got a chance to read my limerick for you under my poets who broke my heart poem. Sugar you are so freakin' amazing Hugsxxx
Vaso Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 9:26 PM
so are you, an inspiration in fact!!!
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February 5, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Oh, how I love this beautiful, imaginative story, Arthur...you have touched my heart tonight...a fav! Hugs, Rhonda
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 9:55 PM
Well every time I see your photo with your beautiful son it touches my heart!!!
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February 4, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Arthur, oh how beautiful is your poem to accompany those amazing statues, the last one truly took my breath away, you have such a talent in writing, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:34 PM
Thank you for such a lovely compliment!
Sathasivam Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed reading. Tfs
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Thank you Ravi
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 2:20 PM
what a sweet magical tale of the poet and those statues. It almost seems like he became a stature too from that last part I read. Lovely,.
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 2:47 AM
This is brilliant Arthur! A lovely romantic piece that enhances your pictures. Mahalo, Connie
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Connie!
Smith Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 6:25 PM
I am right with you Arthur...beautiful piece
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Tim!
Pinet Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 10:27 AM
Your talent and wit wrap themselves around your words and the effect is magical to the reader. Emile.
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Thank you for such high praise Emile!
Nance Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 8:10 AM
:) aww, you are such a romantic! :)
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:30 PM
Only on Saturdays and Tuesdays :)
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February 2, 2015 at 5:46 AM
So glad to have read this today...Only a poet could have felt the longing in the statues of famous artists...wonderful story, splendid write, made me smile today alright. A 7! Warm smiles from the land of thousand isles...Kim :D
Vaso Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 6:34 AM
Thank you for your kind and sweet words Kim!
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February 2, 2015 at 5:00 AM
Majestically romantic! Only a poet's heart could have felt the longing of the statutes' for each other to embrace and this heart yours, dear Arthur, a seven!
Vaso Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 6:33 AM
Thanks Demotrios!
Relish Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 1:51 AM
So very true... a poet can see what others cant... nice pen Arthur... nad!
Vaso Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 6:33 AM
Thank you very much Nadiya!
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February 1, 2015 at 11:19 PM
All the poet needs must be a lovers' embrace,then he would sinh and dance like those statues,with tears of joy open his face..Soo beautiful Arthur!
Vaso Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 12:14 AM
Thank you Charmaine, even if I am tired of kissing statues!
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