The Sameness of Sparrows

It cocks an eye at me.
I recall, as a boy, I stood
by a window looking at a sparrow
just like this one.
Every feather could be the same,
even the mien and stance
of the bird – the same.
I had never thought of myself
as a tree,
yet all my life
I’ve been branching away
from first roots.
Now I’m gnarled, not the same,
and still changing, 
but not this sparrow,
not any sparrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 9:14 PM
A thought-provoking poem so beautifully expressed, Eric. A brilliant piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ashford Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Thank you Susan for these kind comments.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 8:19 PM
Another fave for me. Love this one Eric. Sucker for a good bird or tree metaphor, fantastic poem. xomo
Ashford Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Grins. Thanks again Maureen, good to know I have a Fav fan.
Lawless Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 5:44 PM
I really like this Eric. The title enticed me into the sparrows mystery and led me to its wonderful metaphor. Very nicely done.
Ashford Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Thank you John, it's good to get feedback on this.
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