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The Sameness of Sparrows

It cocks an eye at me. I recall, as a boy, I stood by a window looking at a sparrow just like this one. Every feather could be the same, even the mien and stance of the bird – the same. I had never thought of myself as a tree, yet all my life I’ve been branching away from first roots. Now I’m gnarled, not the same, and still changing, but not this sparrow, not any sparrow.

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Date: 2/29/2020 9:14:00 PM
A thought-provoking poem so beautifully expressed, Eric. A brilliant piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Eric Ashford
Date: 2/29/2020 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Susan for these kind comments.
Date: 2/29/2020 8:19:00 PM
Another fave for me. Love this one Eric. Sucker for a good bird or tree metaphor, fantastic poem. xomo
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Date: 2/29/2020 8:26:00 PM
Grins. Thanks again Maureen, good to know I have a Fav fan.
Date: 2/29/2020 5:44:00 PM
I really like this Eric. The title enticed me into the sparrows mystery and led me to its wonderful metaphor. Very nicely done.
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Date: 2/29/2020 5:59:00 PM
Thank you John, it's good to get feedback on this.

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