The Salt House

oh! my salt house, i cannot assure that you are in the color of azzure! just loitre around and stole our heart to play with thee ! don't you feel sorry to kill us? but i feel for the way we pollute forgive us, and accept as friend please not as fiend!

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Skat A

Date: 10/8/2013 7:19:00 PM

Srinivethaa, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Srinivethaa Rajakrishnan
Date: 11/5/2013 10:27:00 PM

THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT.TO TELL ABOUT ME I AM JUST A STUDENT OF CLASS 9 IN SJN INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL

Bagya Lakshmi

Date: 10/8/2013 5:26:00 AM

great nivethaa by bagya mam

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2013 6:35:00 AM

hello, Srinivethaa, ,intresting and deepI like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Srinivethaa Rajakrishnan

Date: 10/7/2013 4:39:00 AM

very nice personification poem

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2013 4:07:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Srinivethaa ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Srinivethaa Rajakrishnan
Date: 10/7/2013 4:40:00 AM

THANKS ANNE

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/7/2013 4:01:00 AM

Well written and nicely expressed. Love your style and choice of words. Welcome to poetry soup,this a family you can call your own. Wishing you the best. Baron Of Ebullion