The Safety Valve of the Heart-W

A woman in rags with beautiful skin
Rusticity seen all over looking for a job 
To her the village sky was too small to win
She wanted to soar in a city sky to probe.

Moved to the city in one-room apartment
With her husband & daughter with wishes.
After some years the life gave a good start,
But her husband was attacked by paralysis.

Lying in a broken bed numb as a wound
She shed me deforming tiles of the rooms.
A life’s funeral procession was on its round
The man who loved her tore her to pieces.
 
She was still a beauty, accepted another
He made her laugh till she with joy me recall 
I gave her the feelings of a summer shower
She was happy that I was at her beck and call. 

As the time passed when her beauty faded
Embellishing her neck and wrists with jewels
Used rouge, kohl and hair artfully combed
No semblance of the beauty she was, Alas!

Heard the heavy steps on stairs in the night
Leading but to the bedroom of her daughter
I ran to help, heart torn, killed him with spite
Again cure for her was my salty taste and sweat.

I'm tear, multi-faceted emotions of heart much stressed
By happiness, grief, and pain when they are in excess.
 

Dr. Ram Mehta

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Tenth place win in:
Contest: Personify a tear sponsored by HGarvey Daniel Esquire
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Brown Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Dr. Ram. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in HG's contest ;)
Freeman Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Great to see you in the winner's list, DR Ram. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
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April 22, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations Dr.Mehta on your well deserved win---kashinath
Richards Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 8:13 AM
An exquisite poem, Dr. Ram....congratulations on your win!!
Winter Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Warm congratulations on your well deserved win Dr. Ram. A wonderful poem! And thank you again for your constant kindness in taking the time to congratulate me. It is more appreciated than I can express. Love, shar
Horne Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 4:57 AM
Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : ) Thanks, Dr Ram, your contest was great fun
Sweetheart Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your special win in HG's contest with this special expressive piece on tears my friend.. most magnificent ...enjoy your top ten win with luv..
Esquire Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:35 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 10th Place WIN LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG
Johnson Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:13 PM
Lots here to keep one interested in the story. Congratulations Dr. Mehta. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:01 PM
beautiful write as always Dr. Ram. Many congrats,
Magness Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 9:35 PM
Great way to show yourself as a tear. Wonderful wording. Thank you for welcoming me to this great site.
Culverhouse Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 4:11 PM
strong words....I would like to write a poem....safety valve of a blow up canoe.
Foulk Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 12:09 PM
really enjoyed reading this piece of fine poetry. i want to thank you for reading my poetry and for your time to do so, and thank you for your kind comments.
Smith Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 2:08 PM
Wow. Love this.
Devonshire Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 11:58 AM
It seems this woman had a hard life, Dr. Ram, and tears truly are a "safety valve of the heart." Clever comparison. You evoked a lot of heartfelt emotion and compassion for this woman. Surely this will be a winner in HG's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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