The Sad State of the Union

In this so-called modern world today
There's lots of cause for apprehension,
And all the crazy stuff that's going on,
Like the hubbub up in Washington,
Where no one's getting nothing done,
Is only adding to the tension.

It's not that I don't care about
The cost of healthcare, global warming,
And homelessness, and poverty,
And gender inequality,
But sheer governmental lunacy
Is what, to me, is most alarming.

I express my views as best I can,
Never preen, or preach, or yammer,
Keep disdain in check, reproaches small,
And strive through verse to rise above it all,
But now and then when gentler words begin to gall,
I'm rather glad poetic license lets me call
Upon the recourse of bad grammar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 6/29/2022 8:52:00 PM
Love the whole poem, especially the calls for civility -- and bad grammar too! Thanks, Jim.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/30/2022 9:32:00 AM
Very civil of you, G. Thanks.
Date: 6/27/2022 3:25:00 PM
Thank you for the chuckle, fabulous penning! xomo
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/28/2022 7:06:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen.
Date: 6/27/2022 12:33:00 PM
I couldn't have said it better, Jim, so I'm glad you did!!! And you are right on target. "sheer governmental lunacy!" Indeed!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/27/2022 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, L M.
Date: 6/27/2022 12:04:00 PM
I feel as you do, Jim. The world seems to have been turned upside down and we're all in a state of turmoil. The only thing getting done in Washington is one party trying to outwit the other. I have no affiliation, but for goodness sakes... they are supposed to be doing the job of keeping America strong as a Democracy, but all I see is them tearing it apart, piece by wounded piece. Your poem is wonderful.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/27/2022 1:57:00 PM
Jenna, thank you.
Date: 6/27/2022 11:25:00 AM
It is such a sad state, Jim! I am way beyond using gentle words at this point - my blood is boiling. I’m also very sad about it all. Your poem is eloquently written…
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/27/2022 11:27:00 AM
I hope our votes in November and two years from now will make a difference. Thanks, Ilene.
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