The Sad Saga


The aperture was small, but drew me in;
     I saw the rumored 'saga' I had heard
        attest to the temerity within
that so surpassed the sadness told by word.

Tied up with rope and fastened to a pole
     with barren soil and stones his only bed;
        and there, so out of reach, a rusted bowl
next to a soggy, molded piece of bread.

His sullen eyes lacked nuance in his stare;
     proclivity for self-salvation gone...
        no marrow left to counter his despair.
But then, he heard my voice and he was drawn

to stand up tall...tail wagging to and fro...
     for 'man's best friend', new hope did overflow!


November 5, 2018

~4th Place~
Contest: Eight-Word Challenge - 9
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 11/27/2018

Required words used in order of appearance:
aperture  saga  attest  temerity
barren  nuance  proclivity  marrow

~Honorable Mention~
Contest: 400, Any Rhyme - Max Of 14 Lines,
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 06/01/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/1/2019 6:59:00 PM
Wow Sandra, your poem is so brilliantly written I believe I would have chosen it for first place! I am happy I got to read it in Brian's Contest as an HM! Congratulations! This is a Fave for me! Kudos! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/11/2019 3:38:00 PM
A belated thank you, Connie, for your visit and very uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/2/2018 9:15:00 AM
Sandra, I enjoyed reading and love the way you used the 8 words .. Congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2018 3:32:00 PM
Thank you once again, Eve, for your constant support. I appreciate your uplifting comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/28/2018 9:26:00 AM
Lovely done Samdra! Congratulations on your win :) xomo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:16:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/27/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, congrats on a fine placement!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, John! Another fine contest which I thoroughly enjoyed participating in, and I appreciate my fine placement. Sandra
Date: 11/27/2018 8:16:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Sandra - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season - I love this, and once again I am not surprised - you are a treat! :-) <3
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Greg, for your uplifting words of support, and I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. My best wishes to you and yours too for a blessed and meaningful holiday season! :) Sandra
Date: 11/27/2018 7:22:00 PM
Congrats!!! on your fine win my friend...great entry Sandra...love & light...^WW^
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, ^WW^ for your visit and uplifting comment. Sandra
Date: 11/19/2018 11:15:00 PM
A touching, searing tale of careless cruelty, with blessed release by your care and kindness. Well described, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:10:00 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey, for your uplifting and empathetic comments. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 11/5/2018 4:55:00 PM
A sad story Sandra, some people shouldn't be allowed to keep animals. Well written . Good luck in the contest. Tom .
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/5/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Somehow those required words shaped this vision for me! Sandra :)
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