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I run to you, so you can hold me and find a warm vibrant rapture in each other's arms My promise of love, I give to you so you may caress my soul with tender feathered trembles as I caress yours I'll give you my eyes, so you may see the truth and bathe, naked in a universe of rising suns and joyous tomorrows I am yours and you are mine lovers drifting in romantic dreams of forever fulfilled beneath a heavenly sky of moon and stars where the soft glow of the night disappeared with the horizon when our world grew smaller and our arms became the outer reaches of our boundary filled with purple asters and passionate exhalations I offered a sensual universe filled with warm kisses dripping in hunger and you offered a paradise of love's yearning that gives love its sweet intoxication which lingers with each sighing breath burning with desire we captured dreams and wishes in our nets of love then placed them in the palms of our cupped hands held as tender as a butterfly's breath this jewel that glitters is our lover's lamp to light the way through the night where emotion pours from our lips of ardor in a whispered symphony in our soul heard and felt in this timeless night of unbound fervor until we welcomed the morning still looking into the dewy eyes of love

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Date: 2/20/2024 5:26:00 AM
Dear frederick, i always thought you write romance so very well, one of the few that leave me in awe captivated and feeling the depth of emotions woven, the way youv expressed love here is beyond evocative and soul stirring! I felt so much reading this especially loved “ I'll give you my eyes, so you may see the truth and bathe, naked in a universe of rising suns” thats love! Descriptive metaphors and creative lines, the ending is so beautiful too! Emotive and moving. I loved it! Congratulations
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Date: 2/9/2024 10:22:00 AM
Hello Frederic, What a breathtaking ode to the depth and passion of love, blending together intimate pictures and tender emotions with exquisite skill. Each stanza unfolds like a delicate dance as you artfully create a loving portrait of two souls entwined in an eternal embrace, their love a beacon of warmth and light amidst the darkness. This is a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the essence of love's enduring power and timeless beauty. Great Read and good luck! - Blessings, Daniel
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/9/2024 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Daniel for your very kind remarks
Date: 2/8/2024 11:38:00 AM
- Wish this was my poem/work ... you are so good with this type of poem, Frederic - Beautiful as always :) - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/9/2024 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Anne for your kindness

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