The S S Edmund Fitzgerald

“Superior, they said, never gives up her dead
When the gales of November come early” – Gordon Lightfoot, Canadian Balladeer,
from The Wreck of The Edmund Fitzgerald

A song by Gordon Lightfoot I would hear
in 1976, my newborn daughter’s year.

S S Edmund Fitgerald was the ship,
and Lightfoot’s song described its final trip.

I thought that Lightfoot had made up the tale,
like Melville did about a great white whale!

Not having heard the news of it before,
I’d taken the song’s lyrics as semi-ancient lore!

Since having learned the truth, to my surprise,
one year before was that poor ship’s demise!

The ship was wrecked in 1975,
and not one man on board was able to survive.

The night it wrecked came gale-force wind and snow.
The ship in half did break and deep down she did go.

Twenty-nine doomed men – death they could not cheat.
Into the lake they sank five-hundred feet.

In Lake Superior, tenth of November
occurred this wreck the song makes us remember.

Next to the Titanic, this shipwreck I
am most familiar with . . . and why?

Because of  Gordon Lightfoot’s famous song!
“The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald” shall live long.

I cannot match that brilliant balladeer,
so the ship’s tale (as he sings it) you really have to hear!!

Nov. 7, 2021
For Robert James Liguori's  A Noteworthy Ship Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 11/12/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thank you for bringing us the story of the S.S. Edmund Fitzgerald and Lightfoot's musical storytelling. So many things to learn in this life.
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Date: 11/8/2021 2:06:00 AM
You described that tragedy very well. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 11/7/2021 8:53:00 PM
Andrea, excellent poem! I remember the sinking well. I saw the news coverage when I was in college and doing volunteer work. And I was haunted by images of ships searching for survivors. The sinking of The Edmund Fitzgerald and of The Titanic are legendary. Mike
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Date: 11/7/2021 7:08:00 PM
Andrea, marvelous write.
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Date: 11/7/2021 6:59:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I remember when the ship went down. It was a tragedy. I have a copy of that 45. I bought it to keep as a memory. I enjoyed your poem. Good Luck! in the contest. Blessings ~ Debbie
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Date: 11/7/2021 4:13:00 PM
A clever piece for the poetry contest Andrea. Not an easy prompt. Well done...Delice
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Date: 11/7/2021 1:40:00 PM
I remember the song. Great to bring out the history of this one.
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Date: 11/7/2021 12:21:00 PM
Yes. I like your thoughts on Lightfoot's song and on the Fitzgerald. I first heard the song in 1974, and it's been a part of my life since then. My favorite lyric from the song is "Does anyone know where the love of God goes when the waves turn the minutes to hours?" Hearing that always gives me chills! Have a blessed day.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/7/2021 3:02:00 PM
I always believed , like you, that I had heard it BEFORE 76, in my high school years. But according to the web, the song is from '76!!
Date: 11/7/2021 10:26:00 AM
November certainly adds a chill to your words! Aloha1
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