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Nature red in blood, claw and tooth

Late September the hills ring with bellows as stags roar their challenges with gusto collecting up the does into large herds ready to give battle to the very death. Walkers be wary as you too are an intruder many have been pierced by their sharp antlers The nine pointer in his full prime paws in anger this is his land he is master of all he peruses. No tolerance for the young contender they briefly spar and the youngster flees it is not yet his time maybe in a year or two. The master stag bellows out his triumph. A rustle in the undergrowth, and a loud crash heralds the arrival of another stag in his prime they meet with a ground shaking crash of antlers locked in mortal combat they fight for hours. The ground ripped up and red with their blood they struggled back and forth, neither yielding The challenger now weakened gives ground as with a final clash he turns and limps off. The master roars out his victory of this day, gathering up his does takes them to water. It will be his sperm this year that is carried on His fawns that will rollick and frolic the meadows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/12/2015 6:52:00 PM
Lovely piece, a powerful depiction of an awesome and beautiful force of nature. I loved the lines "Walkers be wary as you too are an intruder many have been pierced by their sharp antlers". I almost had such an experience, but was fortunate to get off a warning!
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:17:00 AM
wow, this is great writing. You know a lot about nature, Shadow. Impressive!
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Date: 6/12/2015 2:29:00 AM
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:26:00 PM
To see this spectacle is to be in awe, and to read your poem results in the same emotion Shadow! Excellent! 7
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Date: 6/12/2015 2:30:00 AM
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:23:00 PM
Love the description of the rut, Shadow. What an awesome display you've painted here. . . have you actually seen this in person?
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Date: 6/12/2015 2:30:00 AM
sadly no Dave ty hugs
Date: 6/11/2015 12:23:00 PM
Bravo, a 7, a story well described. The master stag fought hard and earned his victory. I think there is a lesson in this somewhere. If you want something bad enough, you have to fight for it, and defend what's yours....I enjoyed your "favorite old poem contest", Shadow. I told you I'd enter one of yours soon, and I did. It was fun. Can't wait to see what you offer next. I learn and grow with each challenge. Take care, Darlene
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:00:00 PM
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Date: 6/11/2015 11:10:00 AM
- You let me take a long walk into the woods, Shadow - Into the animal world - a really wonderful poem - a 7 ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2015 7:59:00 PM
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