The Rumbling Presence Underneath

It's always there.
And it would speak with eloquence
if I would simply stand aside--
out of the way of anything
besides my clamorous self...
that much beloved (and hated) fellow
who cannot seem to recognize
priorities.

It seems to have some consciousness,
and works its way into my dreams
sometimes, when I am indolent.
And then it briefly has a voice,
stimulates my curiosity,
and may inspire a poem
or a thought to nag at me,
particularly when another soul
is at my side to listen.
Ah, but then it tends to dwindle,
fade and disappear.

No, the buck stops here
and it is mine alone.
Mine to give the care it needs,
and mine to carry
into war, and peace, and consequence.
Mine to rumble with,
and mine even to celebrate--
then,
and now,
and to my own demise--
perhaps beyond for all I know.

I hear it, feel it,
love it helplessly.
Now pardon me, for I must spend
a little time to know it
better still.
     ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 10:22 AM
The rumbles speak loudly to me, Dean. Lovely write....Even if you must leave the reader hanging while you do some listening of your own!
Ludden Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 10:47 AM
When the reader is like you, she is worth hearing!
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January 16, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Thank you, and I really enjoyed visiting your site today. I'll be reading more, and hope you'll look at more of my own. I would value your thoughts, negative ones included. Sorry about the double entry above. I'll try to correct that. -Dean
Parker Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 2:29 PM
How noble is curiosity, how far does the mind travel, whether lost in thoughts that may or may not have meaning, how quiet when they're all gone.... a few thoughts that came to me while reading your poem, thanks for the inspiration
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