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Eagle, Bird, Flight, Flying, Wildlife, Predator, Animal

"Every secret memory, every experience in life, and every thought can be written within the words of a poem." Quote - by Constance
my writing is rudiments ... of planning ... it is undeveloped ... and totally imperfect ... in the beginning my poem is basic needing more elements and some nitty-gritty more guts and a lot more heart ~ storms shake the ocean of my sleep I dream of wings fluttering, fluttering of eagles gliding on whispering winds ~ I must make a foundation that is strong dig deep into my soul for the right emotions laying the groundwork is essential finding the right words and right poetic voice then rewriting and rewriting my poem ~ clouds sail across the sky in my imagination oh, my heart is a temple of withered memories and my mind full of the gauzy feathers ~ I write without stopping the word pouring from my pen I do not hesitate but I do linger and then I take a breath and read my creation sighing, I read it again and again checking the grammar ... the 'poetic voice' ... and it is beautiful ~ so like a mother I cherish this poem born I hold it to my heart ... then I send it on wings to fly and soar ... in the world ...like an eagle gliding ~ _____________________ February 18, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/The Rudiments of Wings Copyright Protected, ID 02-1331-105-18 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Theme chosen- The Rudiments of Wings Written for the Standard contest This or That, Vol. 10 sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 03/02/2022 Second Place

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Date: 3/3/2022 8:40:00 AM
At first blush, I am excited by this poem's masterful conveyance of the creative process in writing a poem. You use original, fresh language and imagery very effectively. However, with deeper introspection, the poem seems to suggest a universality of creative language expression. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2022 9:39:00 AM
Thomas, thank you so much for the great comment and compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/3/2022 5:30:00 AM
Indeed, your words are beauteous hues, scripted, crafted, created by resonance of a vibrant heart! Congrats on your win, Constance
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Date: 3/3/2022 9:40:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and the congrats ~Constance
Date: 3/2/2022 3:41:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance:-) A beautiful, stellar penning that people can relate to. I loved your poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2022 9:41:00 AM
Edward, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and for my placement and the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 2/20/2022 6:30:00 PM
This concept of Rudiments of Wings, you have elevated to what unthinkable level ! Wonderful ingenuity ! All the Best in the contest dear Constance,,,
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:35:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment and compliment and encouragement ~ Constance
Date: 2/18/2022 4:09:00 PM
Nicely done, Constance, the creation of a poem. Blessings
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2022 8:57:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 2/18/2022 4:08:00 PM
As poets we soar to new heights with each poem we create, writing and rewriting, editing and reediting ~like the eagle, a path to fly free. Lovely! Good Luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 2/19/2022 8:57:00 AM
Paulette, thank you so much for the compliment and the wonderful comment, appreciate ~Constance

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