The Rudiments of Wings
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"Every secret memory, every experience in life, and every
thought can be written within the words of a poem."
Quote - by Constance
my writing is rudiments ... of planning ...
it is undeveloped ... and totally imperfect ...
in the beginning my poem is basic
needing more elements and some nitty-gritty
more guts
and a lot more heart
~ storms shake the ocean of my sleep
I dream of wings fluttering, fluttering
of eagles gliding on whispering winds ~
I must make a foundation that is strong
dig deep into my soul for the right emotions
laying the groundwork is essential
finding the right words and right poetic voice
then rewriting and rewriting my poem
~ clouds sail across the sky in my imagination
oh, my heart is a temple of withered memories
and my mind full of the gauzy feathers ~
I write without stopping
the word pouring from my pen
I do not hesitate but I do linger
and then I take a breath and read my creation
sighing, I read it again and again
checking the grammar ... the 'poetic voice' ...
and it is beautiful
~ so like a mother I cherish this poem born
I hold it to my heart ... then I send it on wings
to fly and soar ... in the world
...like an eagle gliding ~
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February 18, 2022
Poetry/Free Verse/The Rudiments of Wings
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1331-105-18
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France
Theme chosen- The Rudiments of Wings
Written for the Standard contest This or That, Vol. 10
sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 03/02/2022
Second Place
Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2022
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