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The Rudiments of Wings

What makes us take off, off in flight. Our wings, wings upon our back. Each beautiful feather, makes up each of our beautiful wings. With our wings we can fly high or low, we can cover you for protection. You will find us in all different sizes, we are your loving guardian angels. Date Written:2/13/2022

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Valsa George

Date: 2/16/2022 7:28:00 PM

These guardian angels follow us and save us from falling into pits of sin and other dangers ! Paula, you have given a divine dimension to wings ! A sweet poem, dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2022 12:47:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my wing write. Have a blessed day....................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/16/2022 12:07:00 PM

Beautiful lines, so true too; well penned.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2022 12:45:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day....................

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/15/2022 6:19:00 PM

Paula, your poem is well written and full of vivid images. The final stanza, in particular, inspires optimism!! I thoroughly appreciated this lovely composition.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/16/2022 10:40:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed my fun angel write. Have a blessed day with smiles...................

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/15/2022 2:11:00 PM

Lovely pen Paula, so well crafted with fine imagery too. Have a blessed day,Gordon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/16/2022 10:39:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day with smiles.....................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/15/2022 12:54:00 PM

And aren't we glad they're there? I know I am, beautifully worded.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/16/2022 10:38:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my angel write. Yes, I am glad guardian angels are always there. Have a blessed day with smiles.....................

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/15/2022 10:45:00 AM

The last lines in specific give hope!! Truly enjoyed this elegant piece. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2022 12:29:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this one. Loving guardian angels come in all sizes. Have a blessed day with smiles.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/14/2022 2:54:00 PM

It's so nice to know we have loving guardian angels. Your poem is a beautiful reminder, Paula. Best of wishes, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2022 9:03:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my write. Yes, loving guardian angels are anywhere. Have a blessed day with smiles.....................

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/14/2022 6:55:00 AM

Very nice Paula. Very freeing. I enjoyed :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/14/2022 1:02:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Wings write. Yes, freeing if only we could fly anywhere. How much fun would that be. Have a blessed day with smiles.....................

Valsa George

Date: 2/13/2022 8:45:00 PM

Paula, it is wings that give us the ability to fly. Though humans don't have visible or tangible wings, we can still fly high on wings of imagination ! A sweet poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/14/2022 1:00:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. Yes, with our imagination we can fly anywhere. Have a blessed day with smiles.....................

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/13/2022 6:18:00 PM

Paula,I enjoyed your poem. Knowing we have a guardian angel allows us to relax and have peace of mind. Well penned. Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/14/2022 12:59:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. I would love to see my guardian angel maybe one day. Have a blessed day with smiles.....................