The Ruba'Iyat of Creteil Lake - Part Eighteen

The Ruba’iyat of Créteil Lake – Part Eighteen

Even as the lower rubbed its dazed eyes over Her hillocks
The light-foot Lass of Lahore made her way past the boating docks
Past the Marie’s dank reedy banks over Her heaving breast
Tip-toeing over the complaining boards of Her nose-bridge locks

Hugging a bottle labeled “OMAR” where Her bust cut an arc -
A left-behind lame garden warbler tweeted its dirge dark
While the doe-eyed Lass tilted the bottle at the water’s edge -
Her own secret message to save the Sufi Khayyam from wreck:

“Oh! Illustrious Beacon of the Saljuk Empire!
Pray! Let me so much as I might deign to sing sans lyre!
The WORD is out: Your Eminence’s proscribed by penal mettle:
The Republic’s Procureur Général wants you in pyre!”

“Your humble sister begs your esteemed bardic indulgence:
Two fitful summers gone past we did cross each other’s presence
Me a mere slip of a girl from yon Ghaznavid Empire
Heard the clamorous reed warbler’s Himalayan penance!”

“This bottle with the missive I know the Lady of the Lake
Will to you waft: tidings dire as to keep me awake
Through bitterly biting lonesome nights you stumble and rove:
Take heed! POLICE cycle-brigades have tripled round the lake!”

© T. Wignesan – Paris, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/25/2014 10:28:00 PM
a very good write ........Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/26/2014 2:54:00 AM
Morning, Skat A! Nice to wake in these dreary times to be greeted by your face, though I can't quite make out the teneur of your comment. I accept the LOVE, of course, without reserve. I take it you've been following the narrative through from Part One? - for that's what it'd take to be tuned into this part. Don't take this as a retort or reproach; just being provocative. Every good wish. Wignesan
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