The Rowboat

the rowboat rocking to the beat of a peaceful lake AP: Honorable Mention 2020 posted on September 2, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/3/2019 10:39:00 PM

I hear the waves lapping the side of the boat!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/4/2019 9:02:00 AM

Yes, totally hypnotic and calming.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/3/2019 5:59:00 AM

gentle poem, I can feel it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/3/2019 6:50:00 PM

Great. Thanks, Caren.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/2/2019 7:40:00 PM

even on the calmest days, the lakes still have a slight beat, i could see this one, almost feel it too... good one :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:06:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/2/2019 7:34:00 PM

'The rocking chair of the lake,' so to speak. Nicely captured, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:06:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.