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The Roses Ain'T Red

I'm no dead So I could Fly to the moon Singing some funny tune With White ribbon in my head And broad smile on my face Hanging on a shoelace Drowning in shiny lagoon I could... But I can't - Why? The roses ain't red!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2012 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Lakasz. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/25/2012 3:36:00 AM

Lukasz super congrats on your win, excellent write...David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2012 8:12:00 AM

LOL sounds like the start of a good childrens book..I think you want [I'm not dead/so I could/fly to the moon/singing some funny tune/with white ribbons on my head/ and a broad smile on my face/while hanging on a shoelace/or drown in a shiny lagoon./I could/but I can't/why?] the last line and the title ..I have NO clue..hmmm unless this is an Alice reference to the Red Queen the Rose Queen and OFF with their heads??? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Jane Kostman

Date: 7/23/2012 5:02:00 PM

Wow..what a nice poem here! Congradulations on your well deserved win! Hope to see you around more...please let me know when you have some new work I would love to check it out! Jane XoXo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2012 9:49:00 AM

congrats on an HM win for this fantastic entry and creative composition luv..