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The Roses Ain'T Red

I'm no dead
So I could

Fly to the moon
Singing some funny tune
With White ribbon in my head
And broad smile on my face
Hanging on a shoelace
Drowning in shiny lagoon

I could...
But I can't
- Why?

The roses ain't red!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 26, 2012 at 10:04 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Lakasz. Love, Carol

David Williams

July 25, 2012 at 3:36 AM

Lukasz super congrats on your win, excellent write...David

Debbie Guzzi

July 24, 2012 at 8:12 AM

LOL sounds like the start of a good childrens book..I think you want [I'm not dead/so I could/fly to the moon/singing some funny tune/with white ribbons on my head/ and a broad smile on my face/while hanging on a shoelace/or drown in a shiny lagoon./I could/but I can't/why?] the last line and the title ..I have NO clue..hmmm unless this is an Alice reference to the Red Queen the Rose Queen and OFF with their heads??? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Jane Kostman

July 23, 2012 at 5:02 PM

Wow..what a nice poem here! Congradulations on your well deserved win! Hope to see you around more...please let me know when you have some new work I would love to check it out! Jane XoXo