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THE ROSE OF VELVET TIME

On the dim lit streets of New York town You danced for uncrowned kings The whiskey harsh upon your lips With eyes that could not see And I'd await by the ocean's shore With the horses tethered fast For dawn would draw you homeward From each exotic dance You sought for what M'lady While youth a withered vine I had but love to give you The rose of velvet time In silks and pleasure lay your dreams As stone became your heart And I rode fast upon the winds But your voice bade me come back So life remained until the morn When the music lost all rhyme A sad goodbye upon the grave The rose of velvet time

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Date: 4/5/2025 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful words!
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Date: 3/27/2025 2:14:00 PM
A beauty! We can see M’lady living it up whilst real love wasted away, with a sad goodbye upon the grave. Congrats on POTD!
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/27/2025 2:21:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words
Date: 3/26/2025 7:11:00 PM
Fascinating poem and cool phrase, "the rose of velvet time"
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/29/2025 10:37:00 PM
Thanks David
Date: 3/26/2025 5:45:00 PM
William, so many emotions tangle around your thoughts. Yes, saying goodbye is difficult, and it often leaves the heart feeling empty at times. I see your words have been placed here as Poem of the Day. My best to you, dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/31/2025 7:45:00 PM
thanks, Brandy
Date: 3/26/2025 4:28:00 PM
There is no pain like this poetically expressed and congratulations on POTD
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/29/2025 10:34:00 PM
thanks
Date: 3/26/2025 3:48:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. Like reading a Poe poem
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/31/2025 7:46:00 PM
thank you
Date: 3/26/2025 3:33:00 PM
congratulation
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/29/2025 10:31:00 PM
thank you
Date: 3/26/2025 3:18:00 PM
Interesting poetry William. Enjoy your time in the spotlight
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William HAYNES
Date: 4/1/2025 12:20:00 PM
thank you, the rose was an interesting woman
Date: 3/26/2025 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed day as you write away...........
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 1:00:00 PM
i'm cheating i am copying old work thank you for commenting
Date: 3/26/2025 10:36:00 AM
Very moody and beautiful, William, and worthy of POTD. Congrats!
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 1:01:00 PM
thank you very much
Date: 3/26/2025 10:28:00 AM
Amazing poetry. Congratulations. Thanks for caring enough to share.
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/31/2025 7:47:00 PM
thank you for commenting
Date: 3/26/2025 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD William.
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 1:05:00 PM
Thank you/ the rose was one special lady
Date: 3/26/2025 8:22:00 AM
A sad story, superbly penned, gripping. Warmest congratulations on POTD, William
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 8:59:00 AM
thanks for your kind words. Rose is one of my personal favorites as it is about Diane
Date: 3/26/2025 8:09:00 AM
Hi Willian, Congratulations on the owner of POTD for this wonderfully crafted write of a lost love. "When the music lost all rhyme, a sad goodbye upon the grave, this rose of velvet time." Exceptional and much enjoyed..
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Nancy glad you enjoyed
Date: 3/26/2025 7:47:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:01:00 AM
thanks for commenting
Date: 3/26/2025 5:49:00 AM
Way to go William. this is a very disarming write that slowly sneaks up on the reader...."but your voice bade me come back".. Read it several times each one leading me deeper into ....
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:03:00 AM
Yes it was a complicated relationship
Date: 3/26/2025 5:42:00 AM
Hello William, Congrats on POTD it is so well-deserved! Your well-inked words show a bittersweet picture of New York's nightlife and lost love. I loved the imagery of "whiskey harsh upon your lips" and "stone became your heart." Congratulations!! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:05:00 AM
thank you very much for your kind words
Date: 3/26/2025 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Beautifully written :)
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:05:00 AM
glad you enjoyed it
Date: 3/26/2025 3:37:00 AM
William, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:06:00 AM
thank you
Date: 3/26/2025 2:16:00 AM
Hello William, congratulations on your POTD win with your amazingly beautiful poem. Loved it. Wishing you a fabulous day as you celebrate your win.
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:09:00 AM
thanks for taking the time to comment/ I'm posting an untitled[as of yet] piece I wrote recently that I hope you'll like
Date: 3/26/2025 2:12:00 AM
- A heartfelt and beautiful poem, William - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) -
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:12:00 AM
I write simple poems that hopefully connect with the reader
Date: 3/26/2025 1:13:00 AM
Beautiful poetry William, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:13:00 AM
Thanks for commenting
Date: 3/26/2025 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations on winning potd! Well done!
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Karen
Date: 3/26/2025 12:33:00 AM
A beautiful tribute William, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:24:00 AM
thanks Tom
Date: 3/25/2025 5:41:00 PM
Wow, William! I hope you get my gest when I say this poem is "The Bomb!" Meaning it nearly blew me away or at least makes my head spin. Looks like I found a new Fav poem along with a new Fav poet. Kudos my newfound poetic friend.
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/26/2025 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Terrell I enjoy your work also
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