THE ROSE OF VELVET TIME

On the dim lit streets of New York town
You danced for uncrowned kings
The whiskey harsh upon your lips
With eyes that could not see

And I'd await by the ocean's shore
With the horses tethered fast
For dawn would draw you homeward
From each exotic dance

You sought for what M'lady
While youth a withered vine
I had but love to give you
The rose of velvet time

In silks and pleasure lay your dreams
As stone became your heart
And I rode fast upon the winds
But your voice bade me come back

So life remained until the morn
When the music lost all rhyme
A sad goodbye upon the grave
The rose of velvet time
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Verma Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 8:23 AM
Beautiful words!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:14 PM
A beauty! We can see M’lady living it up whilst real love wasted away, with a sad goodbye upon the grave. Congrats on POTD!
HAYNES Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Thanks for your kind words
Crandall Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Fascinating poem and cool phrase, "the rose of velvet time"
HAYNES Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Thanks David
Nicole Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 5:45 PM
William, so many emotions tangle around your thoughts. Yes, saying goodbye is difficult, and it often leaves the heart feeling empty at times. I see your words have been placed here as Poem of the Day. My best to you, dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
HAYNES Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 7:45 PM
thanks, Brandy
One Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 4:28 PM
There is no pain like this poetically expressed and congratulations on POTD
HAYNES Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:34 PM
thanks
Mckeithan Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 3:48 PM
Congrats on POTD. Like reading a Poe poem
HAYNES Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 7:46 PM
thank you
Lander Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 3:33 PM
congratulation
HAYNES Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:31 PM
thank you
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed day as you write away...........
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 1:00 PM
i'm cheating i am copying old work thank you for commenting
Slaughter Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:36 AM
Very moody and beautiful, William, and worthy of POTD. Congrats!
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 1:01 PM
thank you very much
Bartley Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Amazing poetry. Congratulations. Thanks for caring enough to share.
HAYNES Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 7:47 PM
thank you for commenting
Read Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your POTD William.
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Thank you/ the rose was one special lady
Seeker Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 8:22 AM
A sad story, superbly penned, gripping. Warmest congratulations on POTD, William
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 8:59 AM
thanks for your kind words. Rose is one of my personal favorites as it is about Diane
Kaufman Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 8:09 AM
Hi Willian, Congratulations on the owner of POTD for this wonderfully crafted write of a lost love. "When the music lost all rhyme, a sad goodbye upon the grave, this rose of velvet time." Exceptional and much enjoyed..
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Nancy glad you enjoyed
May Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 7:47 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:01 AM
thanks for commenting
Lawless Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 5:49 AM
Way to go William. this is a very disarming write that slowly sneaks up on the reader...."but your voice bade me come back".. Read it several times each one leading me deeper into ....
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Yes it was a complicated relationship
Rodgers Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 5:42 AM
Hello William, Congrats on POTD it is so well-deserved! Your well-inked words show a bittersweet picture of New York's nightlife and lost love. I loved the imagery of "whiskey harsh upon your lips" and "stone became your heart." Congratulations!! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:05 AM
thank you very much for your kind words
Sands Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 5:33 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Beautifully written :)
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:05 AM
glad you enjoyed it
Kitchin Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 3:37 AM
William, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:06 AM
thank you
Gifford Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 2:16 AM
Hello William, congratulations on your POTD win with your amazingly beautiful poem. Loved it. Wishing you a fabulous day as you celebrate your win.
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:09 AM
thanks for taking the time to comment/ I'm posting an untitled[as of yet] piece I wrote recently that I hope you'll like
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 2:12 AM
- A heartfelt and beautiful poem, William - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) -
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:12 AM
I write simple poems that hopefully connect with the reader
Edmonds  Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 1:13 AM
Beautiful poetry William, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Thanks for commenting
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 12:55 AM
Congratulations on winning potd! Well done!
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Karen
Cunningham Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 12:33 AM
A beautiful tribute William, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:24 AM
thanks Tom
Martin Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 5:41 PM
Wow, William! I hope you get my gest when I say this poem is "The Bomb!" Meaning it nearly blew me away or at least makes my head spin. Looks like I found a new Fav poem along with a new Fav poet. Kudos my newfound poetic friend.
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:26 AM
Thanks Terrell I enjoy your work also
Rose  Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 3:26 AM
Oh boy was this ever beautiful, " The Rose Of Velvet Time" such a great title for a poem William. You are very talented, and I love your poetry. :)
HAYNES Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:28 AM
THank you Mystic Rose
HAYNES Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 10:26 AM
thank you/ the rose is one of my favorite pieces and i am glad you like my poems
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