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The Rose

Look at the rose, Shriveled and wilted. Petals drooped low, Disfigured and tilted. Weathered the gale, Baked in the heat. Survived the trail, At the end met defeat. Do you not judge, How she looks now? Broken and leaning, Far to the ground? I bet she is stronger, Than you or I think. Though she’s lived longer Her color stays pink. Death may be near, But she’s wiser than I. She does not fear The next chapter in life. One last cold night, She cannot hold on. Though try with her might, Collapses at dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/21/2012 3:18:00 PM
I like the coalition of nature with death
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:52:00 PM
A good write with vivid descriptiveness.
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Monique Brandt
Date: 10/8/2012 12:14:00 AM
Thank you, I very much appreciate your critiques. *Monique

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