The Roots Crowd My Reflection

I’m not you.
And I never will be.
Even though as each day dies off,
I’ve come to notice you in passing windows.
When it should be me looking back,
I realize that I’m the apple that fell.
Far too close to the tree.
When I wish I could’ve rolled a little farther.
I push and push, but my roots always come back to you.
Strangling me and dragging me back to places I will never miss.
My eyes, my lips, my teeth,
They all scream you.
So I change, I change, I change,
Till I can’t even recognize myself.
But on those rare occasions, I find myself catching a glimpse of
Your eyes, your lips, your teeth.
Screaming at me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodgers Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Abbey, this is a poignant exploration of identity and familial ties, where the struggle for self-definition against the backdrop of inherited traits is depicted with raw honesty. The poem resonates with the universal quest for individuality, capturing the complex dance between embracing and escaping one’s lineage. - Blessings, Daniel
Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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December 1, 2023 at 12:42 PM
A powerful first poem to post on here.. Welcome to poetry soup. I look forward to reading more of your poems and I hope you enjoy your time on here..
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