The Room, Mimi, and I

A small study lamb, 
a tea cup with sharpened lead pencils 
(number two),
 polished wooden panels:
walls dressed in masks
 (African vodun mugs).  

An old stone fireplace with
portrait of a colored girl 
dancing above stained hardwood mantel.

Mimi, with a mind as dull as the room,
hung her thoughts out for scrutiny. 
Shadows waltz in the faint glow,
and smell send eyes searching 
and minds speculating
about the smudges on worn carpet. 

From the door, 
dark antique table stood smug, 
on lion’s paws, in a corner to the left.
Grandfather clock with pendulum, 
a tongue that utters time. 

A gem tells of certainty, 
and minds were compelled and led captives, 
but Mimi and her tactless wit
could never fathom why gwampa run.

Grandfather ran when liberty summoned,
and this room expresses a life
that is far too deep for her to clutch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 12, 2010 at 11:32 PM
wonderfun Earle, enjoyed once again,..p.d. *p.s.* I posted a poem dedication, hope you can spy your name in there. (IT IS IN THERE)Thanks for all your comments always p.d.
M V Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 4:02 AM
a warm room,full of life.this is great,friend
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November 6, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Hi Earle I think you have written this so well that it's like looking at a picture.I love the way you write. This is not only descriptive, full of meaningful words and images it also shows what's in your heart,so I cannot fail to be moved by it.This poem is a gem.Thank you for sharing it.Thank you also for reading and for the kind comments on my own piece Love June(Sylvia)
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November 6, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Yes great details in the flowing well written poem...
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