The Rock That You Can Cling To

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Self explanatory romantic poem.

The rock you can cling to

Ill be your knight in shining armour
be beside you when you call
Sword gripped in my  hand to protect you
I'll catch you when you fall

I'll be your shelter, your fortress strong
on those blustery winter days.
Hide yourself inside my protective arms
here forever may you remain

I'll be the rock that you can cling to
when the waves come crashing in
Even though fear may overwhelm you
hold on tight, together we can win

I'll be your bed when you are alone
soft but firm and oh so warm
I'll be your comforter you can wrap up in
I'll keep you safe from the raging storm

I'll be the river flowing, oh so gently
floating your troubles out to sea
Climb aboard, sail on my  trusty ship
make my life complete and marry me.



John Derek Hamilton
June 09, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/11/2016 7:31:00 AM
Oh! this is so beautiful:) A very well written verse:) Till the last stanza, I was able to relate this to our Lord God Almighty:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/13/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Jo, yes it reminds me of my shelter from the storm poem about God, good observation, I never thought about it that way. Thanks for your visit and comment.JDH
Date: 6/10/2016 7:57:00 AM
So romantic! Well expressed.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/10/2016 9:23:00 PM
Thanks Richard for your visit and comment!
Date: 6/9/2016 8:45:00 PM
Very nice poem.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/9/2016 9:43:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and the read and the comment, much appreciated.
Date: 6/9/2016 10:12:00 AM
power in simplicity,that's what I got from this piece,John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/9/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thanks for the read Miraj, and the comment, that's me the simple poet!
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