The Robin Part Two

He is now proud of his picture
The one with flower across his chest
Cos it’s the picture of the year
First prize this was the best

So remember just like the robin
The more you huff and puff
The more likely you are to fall
But that’s not enough

Get up, brush yourself down
Shake your feathers dry
You could still be a winner
If you really try.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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O'Driscoll Avatar
November 2, 2012 at 4:23 PM
enjoyed your lovely poem, love elizabeth
Roberts Avatar
November 2, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Elizabeth, hope you read the 2 parts of it. i felt it was incomplete, leaving him with a flower across his chest. LOL.....Seren
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