The Road You Choose To Travel

Two roads of life
You travel are there
Nothing change but the same
Only you have to choose 
Which one to go through 
One is wide and inviting
The other is narrow and uninviting 
The wide road many has chosen
The other is less traveled
That only few has found it
The inviting road start with happiness 
But end in a bottle-neck rage and destruction
The less traveled road start lonely
But forward they go the road became wide
Soon after this road background turn beautiful 
Air is crispy fresh and colorful trees appear
Colorful fragrant flowers you see everywhere
They see some also travel as they passed by
At last the hearts found excitement and relief
As soon as they see the finishing line at the end.

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Date: 11/9/2024 12:30:00 AM
so true poetry, i love the apparent analogy with some art of Bible, it is quite inspiring poet, thanks have a great week end
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 11/9/2024 2:19:00 AM
You're right in your analysis, Yann. This poem inspiration came from the Bible passage in the New Testament. I was touched at the same time scared on people today who choose the wide road of destruction which is so materialistic and forget the spiritual condition of the soul. I wrote this poem somehow in this way people read might be awaken that there is more to life after this world. If we secure death memorial plan, how much more prepared for eternal life plan. Thank you, Yann that you came across my write ups. I thank you for your comment. I appreciate it very much. Keep your eternal security ahead of your time...
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