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The Road She Walked

She kept walking—until emotions burst. Weeping, she cried out in a public space, Where no one cared enough to stop or see The woman breaking at the corner of the road. In her sobs, a memory returned: A voice, a message— New beginnings, And a man who stood like a torch of light In the dim glow of night. But greed mocked her, And laughter echoed in that cruel place— A dungeon of fire. Still, God sent a kind-hearted rescuer. She was hungry, tired, and pale, On the edge of vanishing into the day. No food, no coin, Just emptiness and dry hope Wishing to leave, To be anywhere else but there. To connect in the world of paradise Where in that place could she find? Where in that place she was betrayed Where in that place, she begged for kindness. It's a truth that she will bring And the hope and courage in her heart that will forever be treasured until she finds a place that she can call "home".

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Date: 7/26/2025 3:02:00 PM
Rowena dear often the souls suffer many years of loneliness and hunger, how wonderful it is when someone reaches out with a helping hand, and helps you believe in life and love again, very well written. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/26/2025 11:37:00 AM
Very descriptive of a woman with a very difficult path of life. Nice metaphors, Rowena.
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Date: 7/26/2025 7:36:00 AM
Dear Rowena, the power of your poignant poem transports me to this harrowing realm of "the road she walked" where her pain in unseen, unheard by mere mortals; are they heartless, or willingly ignorant to her plight, are they too tightly bound by their own struggles too? The voice in the poem is deep and resonate with pain and courage and resilience.. I hope she finds her "home" (and a return to soul-form or rebirth?) where she never feels the pangs of hunger, fatigue or outcast again, but only feels Love and Kindness in the Light where her "hope and courage in her heart will forever be treasured". Your soulful imagery and metaphors are moving, I was especially struck by "a man who stood like a torch of light" - Potent! The beauty of your empathy shines in your amazing verse. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/26/2025 7:50:00 AM
Hi Susan, thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words. I'm really touched that the poem spoke to you that deeply. Yes, I also hope she finds peace and light in the end. Your support and empathy truly mean a lot. Big hugs, my poet friend!
Date: 7/26/2025 5:40:00 AM
Ahhh a knight in shining armor or something more divine? In either case she got the boost she needed. Sweet quats
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/26/2025 6:12:00 AM
Absolutely!
Date: 7/26/2025 4:36:00 AM
Rowena, a poem of this class, tackles issues of pain, resiliency, and the potential for atonement by empathy and connection. It depicts a painful journey that ends with indications of hope and rebirth.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/26/2025 4:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful words!

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