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The Road Back Home

The road back home seems so easy He's been away so long... Will he tiptoe in and say 'Sorry' Before his chance is gone

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Date: 2/21/2022 7:02:00 PM
Nope; come back roaring with laughter, beating on a hand-held snare drum: that's what I would do. Then say sorry.
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Date: 2/20/2022 8:12:00 PM
Very nice rhyme, Gershon.
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Date: 2/20/2022 4:28:00 PM
Exceptional rhyme. Love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/20/2022 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for your nice comment, Gina. Blessings, Gershon
Date: 2/20/2022 4:02:00 PM
I guess it depends on how valid his excuse is! Did I sense the tone on this one? Cheerio G.W...ab
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Date: 2/20/2022 7:54:00 PM
Yes you did, Anselmo. You sensed how toned I am. ~ Piano-tuner
Date: 2/20/2022 3:03:00 AM
Oh, I sure hope so! What a delicate and heartwrenching write!
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Date: 2/20/2022 7:40:00 PM
I'll take 'delicate and heartwrenching' any day of the week. Thanks, Caren. ~ Mr. Goodwrench
Date: 2/20/2022 2:03:00 AM
I can understand this fully, my dear poet friend, sometimes the distance grows bigger and bigger til' one day its gone, the person dies, have experienced this first hand in the family . Thank you for sharing your heart , and your emotions, I fell it, :)
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Date: 2/20/2022 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic, for the heartfelt comment. Much appreciated. :)
Date: 2/19/2022 11:54:00 PM
Hi Gershon…..very intriguing poem….are you talking about someone in particular or is it just random? Good poem…..Debx
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Date: 2/20/2022 7:19:00 PM
Just 'random,' I guess. We'll call him 'Any man.' Thanks, Deb. :)
Date: 2/19/2022 10:09:00 PM
A touching poem, Gershon. It causes me to feel empathy and hope that he does tiptoe in. Best of wishes.
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Date: 2/20/2022 7:10:00 PM
Yeah, he really should tiptoe in and make sure that 'Sorry' is the first word out of his mouth! ~ Gershon

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