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The River Runs Wild

the river runs wild

   leaping over waterfalls

    ....mist reveals rainbow

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James Fraser

January 9, 2011 at 9:05 AM

There's something theraputic about waterfalls as they cascade in symphony. Many congratulation's on your fine win....:)

Deirdre Omaidin

January 7, 2011 at 5:00 AM

Spectacular image of nature. Congratulations. REgards, Déirdre Ó Maidín

Robert Pettit

January 5, 2011 at 8:23 AM

No wonder you won with this one. So few words deliver such vivid descriptiveness.

Eamon Duffin

January 5, 2011 at 7:30 AM

Hi Francine. Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 5, 2011 at 5:20 AM

Congratulations Francine on your win in the "Strict Haiku 2" contest by Charles Henderson. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

January 4, 2011 at 8:18 PM

Many congratulations for this beautiful Haiku and win.

Eiken Laan

January 4, 2011 at 4:37 PM

Francine, Congratulations on your win, I already commented on this haiku today, it is beautiful, well done:))))

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 4, 2011 at 4:36 PM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Charles, Francine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 4, 2011 at 3:52 PM

Congrats Francine on your wonderful winning poem in the Haiku contest with such lovely words of expression my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2011 at 2:38 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

January 4, 2011 at 12:00 PM

i like!!CHEERS for winning in this contest, francine..:) nette

John Freeman

January 4, 2011 at 10:20 AM

Congratulations Francine on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

January 4, 2011 at 9:56 AM

Congratulations Francine on your well deserved win!

Carolyn Devonshire

January 4, 2011 at 8:37 AM

Such a lovely and creative haiku, Francine! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

January 4, 2011 at 7:58 AM

You have painted such a beautiful picture, Francine! Congratulations on your winning poem !! Love, Carrie

Deb Radke

January 4, 2011 at 6:57 AM

Yes. The wild of the river, the raging river leaping wild to reveal the rainbow underneath. Most beautiful and intriguing haiku. Congratulations.

Charles Henderson

January 4, 2011 at 6:19 AM

Francine, congratulations on your fine win with this very good haiku. Charles soup mail

Eiken Laan

January 4, 2011 at 3:44 AM

Wow Francine, this is beautiful, exquisite haiku. I can feel the rushing of that river, great splashing waterfalls and then that rainbow, so beautiful:)))) Thank you for dropping by to comment on my work. xx

Nette Onclaud

January 1, 2011 at 2:55 PM

engrossing 'ku with a certain kind of agile energy to it... lovely, francine; all the best in the contest! :) nette

Joyce Johnson

January 1, 2011 at 11:48 AM

Very pretty Francine. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

January 1, 2011 at 7:12 AM

So descriptive it is like being there..I enjoyed your work this New Year's Day..May this be the best year of your life..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara

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