The River of Life - POTD

As every drop hath magic of its own,
And yet within a river finds its whole,
So are our lives of merit all alone,
And yet a facet in a greater soul.
Or as a shard of light that shines in spring,
Within the fabric of the dazzling day;
We are like notes with which a choir can sing,
But having sung, like notes, we fade away.
Strange thing our moment’s glory is not long,
Is but a passing glance within the all;
So great the wealth of beauty flowing strong,
It little cares that you and I shall fall.
As when at last the final ember’s gone,
A bird is lost, and yet the flock flies on.
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Lowe Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 11:51 AM
A beautiful, profound allegorical canvassing. That last line, literally echoing what I often echo: "Only the worker dies; the work goes on." One. Peace and Love.
Prothero Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 12:49 PM
Thank you!
Gifford Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Hello Jerrold, congratulations on your beautiful poem getting a POTD win. Well deserved. Wonderfully written. Wishing you a great day and a wonderful weekend, fellow poet.
Prothero Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 10:36 AM
Thank you!
Mcclain Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Hey Jerrold, Wow, nice sonnet! Very skillfully crafted and wonderfully expressive--downright Shakespearean!
Prothero Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Thank you! If you like Shakespearean, I have a sonnet on Romeo and Juliet shipping today.
Rodgers Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:37 AM
Hello Jerrold, O' how it flows with such beauty. I felt that each line ripples with wisdom of our fleeting yet significant existence. Your POTD is well-deserved! Your poetic gift touches souls, and I'm honored to witness your artistry. Keep shining. Spring Blessings, my Friend, Daniel
Prothero Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:48 PM
Thank you!
Alex Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 9:22 PM
"We are like notes with which a choir can sing, But having sung, like notes, we fade away" - Classical philosophy of life is illustrated in a very beautiful poetical way. Congratulations!
Prothero Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:48 PM
Thank you!
Sangster - K Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 7:01 PM
A pleasure to read. Congratulations on POTD ~ Anne :-)
Prothero Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:47 PM
Thank you!
Mckeithan Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:39 PM
Congrats on a fine poem to get POTD. Made me think of the Bard.
Prothero Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Thank you!
Bahr Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:20 PM
That is beautiful. Thank you.
Prothero Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Thank you!
Nicole Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:42 PM
' like notes, we fade away, ' and ' our moment’s glory is not long. ' This thought holds so much truth. It reminds me of James 4:14. Our life being like a vapor, appearing for a little time and then vanishing away. Precious our moments, indeed. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations Jerrold, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:09 PM
Thank you!
Bartley Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Thanks for sharing.
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:08 PM
Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 10:18 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Congratulations on your POTD win. Great Ending.... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away............
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:07 PM
Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 8:03 AM
Truly a lovely sonnet, with a memorable conclusion. Congratulations on POTD! ~ Gershon
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:07 PM
Thank you!
Mcintosh Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Yes. The flock flies on... while (if a believer) we wait for them in paradise. SDG. Congratulations on POTD. God bless you, love, Gina
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:06 PM
Thank you!
Trestrail Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:02 AM
Sir, you are a poet indeed. Wonderful writing. So encouraging to see quality verse rewarded with POTD. Congrats and God bless.
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:06 PM
Thank you!
Kaufman Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:58 AM
Dear Jerrold, Congratulations on this well composed exquisite poem, "The River of Life". so rich in wisdom and metaphors. I absolutely need to fav this one! Blessings to you ..
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:05 PM
Thank you!
Lawless Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:49 AM
WOW....beautifully done Jerrold, that final couplet wraps it in an ever passing moment.
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:05 PM
Thank you!
Kitchin Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:33 AM
Jerrold, a great poem, true to life, love the ending. Congratulations on POTD.
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:04 PM
Thank you!
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:09 AM
A beautifully written Sonnet Jerrold. Congratulations on your POTD...Maria
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:04 PM
Thank you!
Gifford Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 3:47 AM
Hello Jerroid, congratulations on your POTD win with your beautifully written poem. A great piece. Wishing you a peaceful day.
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:03 PM
Thank you! It was.
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 3:44 AM
wise words indeed, i especially like the ending of the poem. many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan x
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:02 PM
Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 3:29 AM
- Beautiful written, Jerrold :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) -
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Thank you!
Lane Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Hi, Jerrold. Congratulations on your poem being recognized as today's POTD. Your final couplet could stand alone. Well penned.
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:58 PM
Thank you! I do have some two-line poems, but I am glad this fit into a bigger picture.
Jones Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 2:02 AM
A beautiful sonnet worthy of potd! Congratulations!
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:57 PM
Thank you! This is one of the few sonnets I have composed, I will have to give the form more attention.
Seeker Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 1:37 AM
Beautiful! A deep, spiritual poem, recognising oneness. Hope this is widely read. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Jerrold
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:56 PM
Thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 12:33 AM
A verse of wisdom Jerrold, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Prothero Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 4:55 PM
Thank you!
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