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The River

freshwater river spawning salmon swim upstream ~ fishermen await

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/16/2020 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Are you cooking the salmon????? Let's eat. Enjoy your win and day......
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/16/2020 4:24:00 PM
Thanks Paula, you're welcome, I'll set another place at the table. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 5/15/2020 4:52:00 PM
Amazing haiku, Tom:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/15/2020 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Edward, happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 3/22/2018 3:18:00 AM
Nice one. And what does the salmon think? Many wishes and happy fishing, Kai
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/22/2018 4:33:00 AM
Thank you Kai, I have to.say the salmon are not too happy about it. Tom
Date: 3/6/2018 12:39:00 PM
Initiates alot of feelings... anticipating adventurful peace with beautiful imagery...captures natural life cycles as seasons shift .. beautiful haiku, Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/6/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Melissa, haiku's are new to me, wasn't sure if I had managed to create the image.
Date: 2/28/2018 2:42:00 PM
The water must be freezing or frozen at the moment.. great imagery Tom..
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/28/2018 8:26:00 PM
Thanks S.O. ,Don't think I'd fancy swimming just yet.lol. Tom
Date: 2/28/2018 7:21:00 AM
Hi Tom, You created such a beautiful scene in a few words. Well done:-) Alexis
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/28/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, after seeing them on here and how so few words could project such a strong image I thought I'd give it a go , Its a great site to improve your skills without a doubt. Tom.
Date: 2/28/2018 4:36:00 AM
Love the picture you project, Tom. I hope the fishermen are waiting...downstream:) Regards // paul
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/28/2018 5:43:00 AM
Thank you Paul, they're worn out after travelling long distances, you don't even need a rod I've been told. Tom
Date: 2/27/2018 10:39:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Tom. Love it.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/28/2018 12:20:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 2/27/2018 4:36:00 PM
I want to go fishing Tom. Your Haiku is wonderful.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/27/2018 4:42:00 PM
Thank you Carlos, I'll join you. Tom