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A faint quietness plagues the woods endless. A gunshot-like cracking a jagged stillness. Through exotic woodlands, in the darkness. Grassy to the swollen water's edge mess. A slight mist floats across the shining surface. The lake's surface has a modest brightness. Beautiful dawn's taboo sorrow muffles its voice.
Written: October 15, 2021

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Date: 10/15/2021 11:02:00 PM
Great monorhyme. I love rivers so long as they don't overflow.
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Date: 10/15/2021 9:31:00 PM
A wonderfully crafted poem. I loved the first two lines especially. Evelyn :)
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Date: 10/15/2021 3:22:00 PM
Beautifully written Lasaad :)
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