The Rising Sea

Like the tides of a nighttime sea,
My brilliance wavers and diminishes
My words are buried into the moisture of life’s poisons
Misfortune clenches my throat from expressing my visions

I have plunged into such dark depths
Of this mind
Without a clear understanding of your devotion
Without a better realization
Of your never-ending affection
Of your ever-pressing lips
Onto the prize where your sweet-searching eyes visualize
The golden nuances of your genius
The pressure of those winning words

The winds dance with my intellect,
Jolting my heart in loud, silent jeers 
The waves, black and dusky wait to smother
As I crawl into the arms of another

This mind still spurts
All words that cannot be conjured
All feelings that cannot be muttered
Truth drowns in the asphyxiation of unfamiliar grounds
Rising from these depths as the moonlight glares

This mind still spurts
As the rising sea
In all of its misery
Remembers your words and yearns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 4:41 PM
Like the rising sea your words of love and yearning rise from deep within, Laura. The winds dance with your intellect, as you look for solace in the arms of another...but not enough to erase the strong memory and smoldering desires. ~ Warm regards // paul
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February 21, 2016 at 12:58 AM
This was beautifully penned, Laura ... I loved where my mind went as I was reading the extended metaphor of the Rising Sea. "The golden nuances of your genius" << This is such an epic line, if I do say so myself. Sometimes love has no words to describe it, which makes it all the more powerful and mysterious (though we, being poets, do our best to try anyway!)...
Breidenthal Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Yes, we do try don't we? Thank you Timothy, for your sweet and deep responses to my work. Everything I have read of yours thus far is what I consider epic! ~Laura
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February 20, 2016 at 8:24 PM
The sea of the heart that resents, and fights the gravity of an inscrutable truth, yet the sea of the heart never forgets the source of it's passion, the love which rains into it's lonely expanses, the sky that absorbs and reflects it's deepest colors, this sea of your mighty heart rises with the rain sweet Laura. Gosh, your poems can be such magnifent soul puzzles to me. "The golden nuances of your genius...The winds dance with my intellect." Your weather is dramatic, it lifts me Laura...J.A.B.
Breidenthal Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 7:23 PM
"yet the sea of the heart never forgets the source of it's passion, the love which rains into it's lonely expanses"...you're from heaven, arent you? I cherish your comments immensely, Justin. Thanks <3 ~Laura
Lane Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:21 AM
After having a love that was so cherished, no other can compare. Lovely verses, Laura.
Breidenthal Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Thank you Lin, you are always so encouraging...<3 ~Laura
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