The Rising of the Dusk

The Rising Of The Dusk

a hurry home hour
this sill of winter
just one step away from 
the revealing white of snow.

a change 
surreptitiously  invades the way, 
as landscape morphs
before a weary traveller trudging there
dusk a preamble to the dark of night.

seemingly it rises from the ground
and clings to shapes of tree and rock
whose bright face remains to the west.
a silent battle ensues between.

trees become their skeletal nemesis.
long branches, grasping fingers
clacking in the cold air that filters through
bent and twisted bodies
bare of softening silken green

boulders could be the hunched 
shoulders of ancient ogres 
cursed long ago, by Merlin,
buried by the wayside they once 
hunted for lone travellers at sun down.

The rising dusk is the progenitor of 
many tales told from inn to home.
cautionary stories about the difference
brought on by the coming of dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 3:46 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Nicholsen Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 2:41 PM
This is such a lovely write enjoyed reading your poem here many blessings
Fleming Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 11:46 PM
I miss you and your poetry Patricia. Hope you are well and still able to do a little writing at the very least. Very much hope to hear from you again one day. Lots of affection. :) john
One Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 1:30 PM
Vivid imagery in your poem... Hope you are well. Not seen you in a while
Gauthier Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Lovely poem, Patricia.
Rees Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 5:50 AM
Wonderful words,Patricia. Evocative and mysterious.
Rees Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 5:40 AM
So many vivid images Patricia. A personal imaginative view of dusk conjured up by you- truly evocative.
Fleming Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:49 AM
The imagery that you manage to attach to your poetry is, simply put, - superb! And this is no exception. Fantastic writing, Patricia. Your good friend always. :) john P.s Looking forward to many more poems from your creative pen.
Fleming Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 3:12 AM
As long as you are progressively moving onward that is all that matters, Patricia...one step backwards...two steps forwards...little by little...slow but surely -- and you will soon be there! All my very best wishes. :) john
Cresswell Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Thank you john. It is still fits and starts here.
Cresswell Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 3:04 PM
Thank you george.
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