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The Rise of Orion

Twinkling spheres emerge,
Seasonal constellations:
Stargazing nude limbs.



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For Brian's Images of Fall Contest

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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September 9, 2009 at 2:40 PM

cute way of looking at the stars!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

September 1, 2009 at 3:54 AM

Congratulations, Raul, on your Honorable Mention in Brian’s Images of Fall contest with this wonderful haiku. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Carrie Richards

August 30, 2009 at 8:24 AM

One amazing haiku !! Congratulations Raul !! ~ love, Carrie

August 30, 2009 at 4:43 AM

Raul congrats on placing in Brian's contest, God Bless, mj

Constance La France

August 29, 2009 at 1:42 AM

nice one... congratulations on your win

August 28, 2009 at 6:02 PM

Interesting perspective. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Keep on writing. Karen

August 28, 2009 at 5:18 PM

Another excellent Haiku Raul, and Big congrats for your placing in Brian's contest>>James

Brandee Augustus

August 28, 2009 at 1:26 PM

Your title was already intriguing and your haiku did not disappoint. This is a beautifully written poem. Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this contest.

August 28, 2009 at 11:28 AM

Lovely, Raul! Congrats on your honorable mention! Hugs, Donna

Barbara Gorelick

August 28, 2009 at 6:41 AM

You did it! Wonderful win. Love, BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 28, 2009 at 5:59 AM

Congratulations for your win in Brian's Images of Fall Contest Raul. Love, Carol

August 28, 2009 at 1:25 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian .My latest contest Hymn of Harvest is now opened

Barbara Gorelick

August 26, 2009 at 1:26 PM

Well done Raul..glad to be reading your work. The last line is a doozy( old expression.but then Im old.) BG

August 26, 2009 at 9:14 AM

Bravo, Raul! You've created a heavenly body of work, and this is the twinkling star! This will do well in the contest, I'm sure! Love, Donna

Carrie Richards

August 26, 2009 at 8:06 AM

What an amazing haiku! Leave it to you to be a one of a kind artist with words!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 26, 2009 at 5:37 AM

I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Raul. I thank you for sharing your writing. Best of luck in the contest. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

August 26, 2009 at 4:23 AM

You and Abe have this contest on lock down..his haiku was incredible and your poem is just as magnificent...such beauty..the last line is pure fire...well done.

August 26, 2009 at 12:25 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Raul.Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop

August 25, 2009 at 11:40 PM

i love this kind of Orion:)--well penned--charma

James Marshall Goff

August 25, 2009 at 6:34 PM

line 3 rocks the soup! Ruben! WOW! jimbo

August 25, 2009 at 6:30 PM

tell them limbs to put some leaves back on ..........great write gangsta !!!!!!!!!

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