The Rise of Orion

Twinkling spheres emerge,
Seasonal constellations:
Stargazing nude limbs.



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For Brian's Images of Fall Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/9/2009 2:40:00 PM
cute way of looking at the stars!
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Date: 9/1/2009 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Raul, on your Honorable Mention in Brian’s Images of Fall contest with this wonderful haiku. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 8/30/2009 8:24:00 AM
One amazing haiku !! Congratulations Raul !! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 8/30/2009 4:43:00 AM
Raul congrats on placing in Brian's contest, God Bless, mj
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Date: 8/29/2009 1:42:00 AM
nice one... congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/28/2009 6:02:00 PM
Interesting perspective. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:18:00 PM
Another excellent Haiku Raul, and Big congrats for your placing in Brian's contest>>James
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Date: 8/28/2009 1:26:00 PM
Your title was already intriguing and your haiku did not disappoint. This is a beautifully written poem. Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this contest.
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Date: 8/28/2009 11:28:00 AM
Lovely, Raul! Congrats on your honorable mention! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 8/28/2009 6:41:00 AM
You did it! Wonderful win. Love, BG
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in Brian's Images of Fall Contest Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2009 1:25:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian .My latest contest Hymn of Harvest is now opened
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Date: 8/26/2009 1:26:00 PM
Well done Raul..glad to be reading your work. The last line is a doozy( old expression.but then Im old.) BG
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Date: 8/26/2009 9:14:00 AM
Bravo, Raul! You've created a heavenly body of work, and this is the twinkling star! This will do well in the contest, I'm sure! Love, Donna
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Date: 8/26/2009 8:06:00 AM
What an amazing haiku! Leave it to you to be a one of a kind artist with words!!
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Date: 8/26/2009 5:37:00 AM
I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Raul. I thank you for sharing your writing. Best of luck in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 4:23:00 AM
You and Abe have this contest on lock down..his haiku was incredible and your poem is just as magnificent...such beauty..the last line is pure fire...well done.
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Date: 8/26/2009 12:25:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Raul.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/25/2009 11:40:00 PM
i love this kind of Orion:)--well penned--charma
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Date: 8/25/2009 6:34:00 PM
line 3 rocks the soup! Ruben! WOW! jimbo
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Date: 8/25/2009 6:30:00 PM
tell them limbs to put some leaves back on ..........great write gangsta !!!!!!!!!
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