The Rise and Fall of Empires

An empire rises, 
When the trees are in their prime,
Until axes can be heard ringing all the time,
And the waters start to rise above the plimsoll line

An empire dies,
When the old men of the forest,
Are cut down with the rest,
Leaving the sun to do the rest.

When the sun has done its job,
And the water level drops,
Enough to see the mountain tops,
Up another forest pops.

I hope the next time an empire rises,
And before the sound of axes becomes too loud,
The people will think it sound,
To keep a few trees around. 

Of course  a sun hat or two,
May be needed,
So planting of trees between axe strokes is not impeded,
By Sunstroke that has gone unheeded.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/22/2021 4:29:00 AM
Profound writing depicting the history of humanity and reminding us that nothing is permanent! Excellent work, my friend, David! Blessings.
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Date: 3/22/2021 5:06:00 PM
Thank you for that wonderful comment Demetrios. It means a lot coming from someone I trust to give honest feedback. Along with wonderful poetry to enjoy, that is why I am still posting on the soup. We are having a late summer here and still picking strawberries from the garden for our grandson. If we don't meet in this world I feel we will meet in after life. Blessing to you from David in NZ
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