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The Rise of the Phoenix

for when the wind blows strong, its tough to withold ur ground, the surface withers, scars are formed, but its the time your skills are honed, your vigour may weaken, you may go down, but u should know not to frown, for all that matters is what you desire, to be reborn from your ashes or, just burn in that fire !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/20/2016 10:06:00 AM
arn, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:17:00 PM
ARN, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/29/2015 12:53:00 PM
Poetical creation is lived with intensity by each great poet.Congrat. and all the best!
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Date: 1/26/2015 8:39:00 AM
Very nice pen Arn Ban! Enjoyed your piece dear friend. A 7 from me!Have a very nice day! The best to you! Blessings! D. ^O^
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Arn Ban
Date: 1/26/2015 9:23:00 AM
thank you dorian :)
Date: 1/26/2015 7:54:00 AM
Nicely written Arnie.....Seren
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Arn Ban
Date: 1/26/2015 7:57:00 AM
thank you :)

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