The Rise

The rise, like an inhale breathe slowly, breathe longingly The fattening of the dough the tummy expectant, the tummy expanding Cocooned in its nest its stretchiness, its pleasant scents Like an infant in a swaddle the soothing towel, slightly moist The rise, like an inhale breathe slowly, breathe longingly The ascent complete lungs exhaustively expanded, waiting to exhale The arousing response bright light, hands stimulate dough The pushback of palms elasticity released, globular rest The rise, like an inhale breathe slowly, breathe longingly After shaping the dough blanket over sleeping creation, one final rest Our daily bread of prayer produced, from suffering loosed The “fourth man” in the oven graced inner softness, cortical strength
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 12:03 PM
This is so beautiful I couldn't help but fav it, Kim! What a deep mind!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Thank you, Paige! I appreciate you!
Daniel Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 8:30 AM
This is deep, Kim, so many layers to it, splendid:)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Thank you so much, Joanna! :)
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