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The Rise

The rise, like an inhale breathe slowly, breathe longingly The fattening of the dough the tummy expectant, the tummy expanding Cocooned in its nest its stretchiness, its pleasant scents Like an infant in a swaddle the soothing towel, slightly moist The rise, like an inhale breathe slowly, breathe longingly The ascent complete lungs exhaustively expanded, waiting to exhale The arousing response bright light, hands stimulate dough The pushback of palms elasticity released, globular rest The rise, like an inhale breathe slowly, breathe longingly After shaping the dough blanket over sleeping creation, one final rest Our daily bread of prayer produced, from suffering loosed The “fourth man” in the oven graced inner softness, cortical strength

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Date: 7/18/2023 12:03:00 PM
This is so beautiful I couldn't help but fav it, Kim! What a deep mind!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! I appreciate you!
Date: 7/15/2023 8:30:00 AM
This is deep, Kim, so many layers to it, splendid:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2023 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joanna! :)

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