The Ride Home

The melon yellow sun, burns through 
the winter forest,
backlighting it in shades of gray and mauve,
causing retinal flashes;
impeding the forward progress of traffic.
Car headlights, string out across the vista 
of days end, like reminders of Christmas past.
Red tails flare, as the iron horses baulk 
at fallen limbs, left by the last winter storm.
The air is heavy with 
the monsters mechanical breath.
And, within the belly of the beast,
behind their lensed lids, condensation forms.
Frost, smeared by the fingers 
of its symbiotic masters,
make the lifeless quadrupeds appear myopic,
As they rush frantically forward into 
the on coming night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/3/2009 10:16:00 AM
Highly descriptive write. Beautifully done. Vince
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Date: 1/2/2009 5:43:00 PM
So many wonderful descriptions in this mystical yet, identifyable poem! Beautifully written! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/2/2009 2:13:00 PM
nice write, I love the way you wrote this"Within the belly of the beast" and "The melon yellow sun" beautiful write. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 1/2/2009 1:38:00 PM
Nice work Deborah, 'the melon yellow sun' I like that, I hope you have a blessed new year...Raul
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