The Richness of My Love

The richness of my love defies belief
Luxuriant and silky are my dreams
With warmth and passion sweet I hover near
Caressing hands and kisses flow in streams

I nourish hunger of the deepest kind
The darkest secrets of your soul reveal
No need to feel ashamed or hide away
Your brokenness with love I will conceal

The fantasy you dare not breathe a soul
For fear your need will meet unbending heart
Now whisper softy in my listening ear
And let me bring to life its every part

I am your Passion Queen, give in to me
Now part your lips and let me give a treat
Yes, take it in, and savor now my breast
For it’s been dipped in honey ever sweet

In jasmine perfumed bed now gently lie
As hands dripping with oil your body tease
Entangled in my hair, your hands command
My lips and mouth that hunger now to please

Desire will not wait a moment more
I give myself to you to be possessed
You sink into warm softness of my core
A mutual release of bodies pressed

My heart the only candle left to burn
Your body bathed, you’re now enticed to sleep
Before you’re whisked away to dreamland fair
I whisper promised love, an ocean deep

November 19, 2013
For Charlotte's Scorcher Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/22/2013 10:12:00 PM
YOWZERS. this is what she wants, for SURE. Much better than my drag queen. ahhaha. thanks for hearing the Kinks' song. I listened to that song over and over again in the early 70's and to this day I will defend the possibility of Lola to be a real female (the words are so ambiguous), but according to Google, the song's intent was truly to make her a drag queen!! DANG
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Date: 11/22/2013 10:12:00 PM
and again, I LOVE YOUR POEM. Best of the bunch so far. well, of what I have read anyway.
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Date: 11/21/2013 2:14:00 PM
Wow. Every time I read one of your poems I am truly captivated. Great write ; )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:19:00 PM
Oh Justice.....YOU can write GREAT WRITE anytime! :) Thanks ever so much!
Date: 11/21/2013 9:21:00 AM
Good morning Eileen, i think I enjoyed this one even more today. Explain Iambic Pentameter to me. I would have thought this was a quatrain.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:04:00 PM
Richard.....welcome! :) Soup mailed ya on that. Thanks for visiting. I don't have anything new up yet....Will try to get going....
Date: 11/21/2013 7:17:00 AM
Diving into your ocean? Who the hell needs a raft after that one?? =D Utterly deep & mesmerizing in its sensual dialect. Awesome job!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:05:00 PM
DRAKE!! Seriously...Your posts are just SO amazing!!! :) Thanks for making me SMILE!
Date: 11/21/2013 5:56:00 AM
- Truly a wonderful poem my friend Eileen!! - (Good luck on radio shows :)- Luck in contest. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:05:00 PM
Thanks, Dear....I'm so so looking forward to this Sunday. Hope lots of you call in! HUGS!
Date: 11/20/2013 5:57:00 PM
Hello Sweet dear Eileen, I smell the perfume from your pen, and it says LOVELY beyond compare. A Queen, how sweet the sound.... hugs and cheers... good luck in the contest...LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:07:00 PM
Thanks, PD. Love having this visit from you. I've missed your visits. Hope all is well....Joined this contest after Frank's post! I've been shying away from contests lately. We will see how things go......hugs
Date: 11/20/2013 3:50:00 PM
Your poem is perfect Eileen, love is deeper than the sea. Here you have yourself the perfect ending. Love ~SKAT~
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:08:00 PM
SKAT! Thanks ever so much for this lovely post...Your kindness warms my heart. :)
Date: 11/20/2013 3:19:00 PM
I had fun reading the comments.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:08:00 PM
:)
Date: 11/20/2013 2:40:00 PM
I came all the way to Lebanon but could not find you? Where have you been hiding? A beautiful poem with deep sensational expressions
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:09:00 PM
:) You didn't look hard enough, my dear ;) Thanks for the lovely visit and post! Hugs!
Date: 11/20/2013 1:39:00 PM
you sizzle , eileen.. oh my, breathlessly sumptuous i go whooozy... fascinated to say the least!... love it!..:) huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/20/2013 1:58:00 PM
SIZZLEEEEEEEEE............Yes......I like sizzle. Great choice of word, my dear Nette. Thanks! Hugs
Date: 11/20/2013 12:07:00 PM
Wow, what a very Hot passionate and erotic poem. What an awesome write. Having written this it is time now for me to go to confession. Again WOW!
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Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 11/20/2013 2:31:00 PM
I'm sending you soup mail
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/20/2013 12:56:00 PM
Tell me when you get back, Jon! ;) Thanks for the post. I was trying to see if there is a difference between sensual and erotic. Personally, I think this tends more to the sensual side, but I guess we all have different perceptions......thanks!
Date: 11/20/2013 10:52:00 AM
Queen of Passion indeed, girlfriend. You surely deserve the title. You had me a-rockin' and a-rollin' through this write. Lovely work, my passionate friend. Huggies, Licia :-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/20/2013 12:56:00 PM
I will wear it with pride. I do think passion and sensuality are lovely...Thanks for passing by, girlfriend. Always always a joy!
Date: 11/20/2013 10:02:00 AM
This one makes me think of the songs of Solomon. Very erotic and tastefully expressed.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/21/2013 2:12:00 PM
Yes.......it is hard to write something sensual without sometimes become a bit....what's the world I'm looking for......vulgar? Yes, tastefully done is lovely, Richard. I was hoping that I'd get that comment. Somehow erotic just is a bit too.....disconcerting for me! ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/20/2013 3:18:00 PM
Really?
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/20/2013 12:57:00 PM
Thank you for tastefully expressed. I was hoping to get that.
Date: 11/19/2013 7:52:00 PM
Wow, The Queen of Passion Strikes again. Many oceans deep is the love in this poem my little Desert Orchid. You are a temptress lol. Take care, Richard. btw, great write haha
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/20/2013 12:59:00 PM
Hmmmmmmmmmm............temptress, indeed. Are you suggesting that I'm Delilah incarnate? MR SEAL.....you are walking a fine line, my dear man. GREAT POEM........Of course it is! I wrote it! Do you have any doubts????? This time, Great Write is appreciated.
Date: 11/19/2013 4:31:00 PM
Ow firstly i am looking forward to call on drake s show this Sunday and to hear you dear Eileen.Secondly this poem.transmits emotion..love and passion..Worked out like a patchwork.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/20/2013 12:54:00 PM
WOW! It will be great to hear your voice, beautiful one! I'm so looking forward to the show. Thanks for your comment on this poem. I started it going one way and it took me another....... ;)
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