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blue swelling waves that quench the sun’s dry lips; they wait for night to dance beneath the stars. ------------------------------------ The Sea Paul Callus ~ 8th Dec, 2015 Contest: Language of water Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Placed 3rd

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Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 9:37:00 PM

PAUL, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**

Paul Callus
Date: 12/15/2015 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, Skat:) All the best & hugs // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/13/2015 5:44:00 AM

This is awesome. I see you placed, not surprise there it is well done. Congratulations ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 12/13/2015 11:44:00 AM

Thank you CayCay:) The Tetractys form easily lends itself to writing. Hope you've been having a lovely weekend. All the best. // paul

Donna Jones

Date: 12/12/2015 10:06:00 PM

Wow! Paul! Outstanding poem....my favorite tonight.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/13/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thank you, Donna. So pleased that you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/11/2015 4:33:00 PM

Thank you, Nayda; I appreciate the visits and support:) Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/10/2015 10:55:00 PM

Congrats on wonderful write n win Paul!I too wrote on Ocean..

Paul Callus
Date: 12/12/2015 7:33:00 AM

Hi Upma! I already replied to your comment yesterday, but just now I realized that it has disappeared! Thank you and enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

David Mohn

Date: 12/10/2015 7:57:00 PM

rhythmic indeed...I suspect the waves near Malta have a special sway on your soul...congrats Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 12/11/2015 4:31:00 PM

Thank you for the pleasant feedback, David:) These lines have been inspired by the lovely summer Mediterranean sea! I am very much in contact with it since I live quite near to the beach. ~ Regards // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/10/2015 12:14:00 PM

Dreamy! Congrats on your win. BG

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 1:07:00 PM

Thank you, Barbara! ~ Al the best. // paul

James Inman

Date: 12/10/2015 7:47:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 11:59:00 AM

Thank you, James. Your entry was a worthy interpretation of this topic! // paul

Michael Tor

Date: 12/10/2015 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations Paul great imagery. Nice win!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 11:45:00 AM

Thank you Michael. Kind of you to stop by. ~ All the best. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/10/2015 4:20:00 AM

invigorating me with your water prance, paul.. sweet , high congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Nette; participating in your contests is always inspiring and a pleasure. Have a nice day! Hugs // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 12/9/2015 6:12:00 PM

gl in the contest! A wonderful write!! as always Paul...:) -luloo *smiles*

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 2:30:00 AM

Thank you Laura. Your sincere support is appreciated. ~ Have a nice day:) // paul

Done Posting

Date: 12/8/2015 8:00:00 PM

Excellent, Paul. Just excellent.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/9/2015 12:36:00 PM

Thank you FR. I am pleased that you found this short poem to your liking. ~ All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2015 6:05:00 PM

Mine is up now. By the way, poor artist Kindade is dead. I just read it when I went to get some of his pictures to put with my poem

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2015 8:50:00 PM

yes he did!!! younger than me

Paul Callus
Date: 12/9/2015 12:05:00 PM

Read and enjoyed your entry, Andrea:) Pity Kindade passed away so young:( // paul

John Hamilton

Date: 12/8/2015 4:54:00 PM

Very nice, we picked the same, but I like yours better, I taste a salty winner here.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/9/2015 12:00:00 PM

You are too kind, John; I enjoyed your entry, too:) ~ All the best. // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 12/8/2015 4:46:00 PM

Wonderful Paul, worthy of a win :) -lu *smiles*

Paul Callus
Date: 12/9/2015 9:36:00 AM

Thank you, Laura, for liking and the faith you show in it:) ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2015 4:10:00 PM

This is fantastic. I see you used some of the same ideas that I did (mine is not posted yet, but when you see it, you will see what I mean, for ocean!!!)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/8/2015 5:05:00 PM

Thank you for the 'fantastic' comment, Andrea:) I'm looking forward to read yours, and compare! ~ Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 12/8/2015 3:39:00 PM

very beautiful personification Paul good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 12/8/2015 5:03:00 PM

Thank you Jan:) I clicked on water, then tried personification, but there isn't one in the list. Goodnight. Hugs // paul