The Revenge of the Cat

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The three imps decided to explore
And obtain a few treats as before.
Behind them, a cat mewed for her treat
But they refused in their own conceit.

The feline vowed she'd have her revenge,
They weren't afraid of any challenge
The cat saw them enter unafraid
As night darkness fell all light did fade.

A sharp moonbeam fell on a painting.
A lady, lovely but eyes glaring.
She screamed at the bad boys for stealing
The treats, in a manner unfeeling.

Fear entered their souls as all sweets fell.
The woman uttered a nasty spell
The moon shone brightly on the beauty.
On her lap, she kissed her black booty.

Many came to see cat on her lap,
It is witchcraft, said a nervous chap.
No one dared enter the house at night,
They'd rush out in fear, scratched and uptight.

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Date: 10/25/2022 4:07:00 AM
Halloween is beginning to influence our writing, time to be spooky...Delice
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Date: 10/19/2022 5:12:00 PM
You had us on the edge of our seats Victor. Truly a haunting tale. So clever in its creation my friend perfect for the fall holiday of Halloween...
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Date: 10/19/2022 2:14:00 PM
Purrfectly spooky Victor! :)
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Date: 10/17/2022 8:24:00 PM
What a totally cool Halloween tale. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/17/2022 11:21:00 AM
What scary goings on! Kitties need their Halloween treats, too. A fantastic story, Victor. :D
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Date: 10/16/2022 11:12:00 PM
Wow! What a very spooky story, thank you Victor, I enjoyed it very much. Take care, Shirley
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Date: 10/16/2022 5:20:00 PM
Very spooky Victor! This would be a scary one to read around a campfire this month for sure! It gave me an idea that may work for our spook house, a portrait of a lady with glowing eyes, and her pretty kitty on her lap, maybe glowing eyes too! Yikes!!! My grandbabies love our tradition of our 'spooky houses' we try to host for them at our harvest parties each year! :O
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Date: 10/16/2022 5:05:00 PM
Black cats will always get their revenge, I was bitten and scratched by one recently after I’d been stroking him he suddenly attacked, his owner said it was because I’d touched a scar I didn’t know he had, so I suppose I can’t blame him for that. Enjoyed the Halloween read Victor… Belle
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Date: 10/16/2022 12:08:00 PM
Creative Halloween work you have penned. It is best to not go out on a night like that. It is too, too scary. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2022 8:33:00 AM
Cool Halloween tale. Never underestimate a black cat. I had one once. She was pretty awesome.
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Date: 10/15/2022 8:34:00 PM
Loved where you took me to, with this fine tale Victor, thoroughly enjoyable.
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Date: 10/15/2022 5:58:00 PM
Silly imps, I'm with poor kitty the dusky beauty with a cute booty, who was skipped out of treats, and now everyone comes to take a peek at the magic of the cat! Love it Victor. Faving it!
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Date: 10/15/2022 5:24:00 PM
Great storytelling, Victor. Nicely written!
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Date: 10/15/2022 1:43:00 PM
Love the spooky feeling of this story
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Date: 10/15/2022 8:50:00 AM
Wonderful Victor! You captured me and held my attention as I became part of the visuals and emotions ! Love your stories ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/15/2022 10:34:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/15/2022 5:44:00 AM
Victor, you are putting on display your imaginative brilliance, together with your creative abilities and great storytelling skills. Outstanding performance every time.
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Date: 10/15/2022 5:15:00 AM
Your imagination runs riot as always, dear Victor ! Enjoyed....
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Date: 10/15/2022 5:09:00 AM
Your creativity and wonderful story telling prowess on display here, Victor. Excellent as always.
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Date: 10/15/2022 4:14:00 AM
As always, Victor, you are a great storyteller! Great last line.
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