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The Resurrection

death, to life, flares fire sweetest pine-pitch springs skyward sparks prance on sap hiss twigs crumble crunch with flames kiss yellow lapping tongues lick contest: Wow Me in Five Lines

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/11/2010 1:45:00 AM

Wow! No wonder you place so well in this one. Very nice.

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/27/2010 2:51:00 PM

So descriptive and wonderful! Love this terrific poem.......can almost whiff the pine scent of this one! Congratulations on your win!! O:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2010 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your win in Brian Strand's contest "High Fives" . Love, Carol

Brandee Augustus

Date: 7/26/2010 6:30:00 PM

Nice!!!!! Very imaginative! Congratulations

Elaine George

Date: 7/26/2010 8:37:00 AM

Wow! The images, sounds and colours in this Tanka are incredible, Deb. Congratulations on your win. Love, Lainie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/25/2010 7:08:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your fine "firey" poem being a winner. BG

Rick Parise

Date: 7/25/2010 5:22:00 PM

Wow Deborah, Great imagery~Congrats on the second place win in Brians contest!!~Rick~

Gareth Stockwood

Date: 5/9/2009 2:49:00 PM

brilliant verse really enjoyed this one well done ....... from gareth

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/7/2009 5:38:00 PM

Awesome imagery! - jeremiah

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/7/2009 4:03:00 PM

interesting write filled with good imagery I love the last line! Laura :)

Diane Christian

Date: 5/7/2009 12:10:00 PM

AMEN TO THIS WRITE MY FRIEND ITS A GREAT WRITE, GOD BLESS FROM DIANE