Raul Moreno Poet Concrete

The Resumption of Life

Before morning sun,

Judas sold God’s son.

For the resurrection reminds us all of when,

Jesus Christ of Nazareth was crucified for our sins.

Then he was placed and encased in a tomb,

Lifeless, Jesus resumed.

Three days he laid alone,

Barricaded by a stone.

While everyone mourned,

Jesus rose on Easter morn.
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-For Brian’s contest-

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Chris Goombi March 25, 2009 at 2:06 AM an overwhelming shape. Your gift is amazing.

Tyler Martin March 23, 2009 at 11:30 PM Awesome shape, congrats in placing. Tyler

John Heck March 8, 2009 at 11:23 AM Dear Raul - CONGRATS on your WIN in Brian's contest. Superbly written. Wishing you & your loved one's a Happy & Blessed Easter. Peace always, John

Michael Jordan March 7, 2009 at 4:53 PM Raul I simply loved this poem and i still do in fact I have started a new favorite poem list that I am adding this to - Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest - God Bless, MJ

Leon Wilson March 7, 2009 at 4:02 PM Hi Raul Congratulations on your win great poem. Keep praising. Leon

Joyce Johnson March 7, 2009 at 2:37 PM I like your version of the Easter Story. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sharon Winter March 7, 2009 at 12:21 PM Congratulations dear Raul on your beautiful and well deserved win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass March 7, 2009 at 11:39 AM Congratulatons on your win in Brian's contest with lovely Epistle! Sos beautiful to read and look at! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards March 7, 2009 at 9:00 AM Excellent poem for Brian's contest, Raul!! Very moving, and well deserving a win...Congratulations!! ~ Carrie

Brian Strand March 7, 2009 at 7:54 AM Congrats on your success in my Easter contest Raul.Rgds Brian

Elizabeth Neal March 4, 2009 at 8:03 PM Beautiful creation you have made here, the shape captures my eye. The contents so true. Love E.

Daniel Neal March 4, 2009 at 2:41 PM Beautiful work in this couplet the form is nice as well as the shape of it. Good luck in the contest with this double whammy. DN

February 26, 2009 at 12:11 PM The shape of this poem is artistic and works well with your message. Blessings to you for sharing it. Thank you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Brian Strand February 26, 2009 at 8:27 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter February 26, 2009 at 4:44 AM Well done Raul! Good luck in the contest! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins February 26, 2009 at 3:55 AM This is a very good piece Raul..you captured this very well brother. Best wishes in the contest.

Tyesha Ehigiator February 25, 2009 at 9:46 PM Beautiful indeed, creatively crafted and structured perfectly. You have painted a amazing picture here with your words reflecting our Lord Jesus Christ...Stunning!!God Bless You and Best Wishes to you in the contest. *Tyesha

Michael Jordan February 25, 2009 at 8:56 PM Raul, well you got my vote - You know the way it's shaped just like a cross it could actually be a "Shape" poem - just a thought - At any rate this is one of the most impressive poems I have read - Simple straight forward and just perfect in every way - i tip my hat Sir for this is very special - God Bless, MJ