Notes About The Poem

Written on March 2, 2024

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The Rest of the Story

- the rest of the story for Hickory Dickory Dock - Hickory dickory dock, The mouse wound the clock, At half past twelve The clock said it was one And so the clock was wrong Hickory dickory dock The mouse wound the clock, With each twist it smiled, Knowing this clock would decide, When its cheese would arrive! Hickory dickory dock The mouse wound the clock, Gaining over an hour, So the cheese wouldn’t sour, Hickory dickory dock!
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Fowler Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Cute one Regina. Congratulations! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a cute/fun~write/picture. Have a blessed day...............
Rodgers Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Dear Regina, your imaginative twist on is delightfully whimsical! The playful narrative of the mouse and the clock adds depth to a beloved nursery rhyme. Your poem is a charming with all the magic found in storytelling. It left me smiling, envisioning the mouse's clever antics. - Blessings, Daniel
One Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 7:48 AM
This is the second one I have read today on this fable.. nicely done and best of luck in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 7:48 AM
A fun take on the story poem, Gina. Enjoyed the rest of the story--you read the mouse's thoughts brilliantly.
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